Raphael The Redemption (3)
Teresa Ann Salyer

 

Yeah, let’s say that it is just
Like that.

JERRY
Hey, Raphael, baby, I’m in…

Steven comes into the bar and sits down at the bar.
Raphael leaves his table and joins him.

RAPHAEL
Steen, Steven O’Brian. I
Recognize you from the CNN
Broadcast.

STEVEN
Yes, hi.

Raphael and Steven shake hands.

RAPHAEL
I’m impressed with your
Dedication to world peace.

STEVEN
Well, just doing my job,
As they say.

RAPHAEL
But, it is just the one thing…

STEVEN
What thing is that my friend?

RAPHAEL
Oh, the helicopter business.

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RAPHAEL (CONT’D)
Do you trust these heathen.
Maybe, they’ll use the heli-
Copters to dump that toxic
Stuff all over us and Kingdom
Come.

STEVEN
Let’s hope that they keep their
Word, and that they use the
Choppers for crop dusting.

RAPHAEL
But, it scares you a little,
Doesn’t it?

STEVEN
(laughs)
A little. Just a little.

Steven looks at his watch.

RAPHAEL
Supposed to meet someone?

STEVEN
You must read minds.

RAPHAEL
Yeah, I do a bit.

Raphael takes Steven’s hand and holds it firmlly.

RAPHAEL
Oh, by the way, Steven
Where do they keep those
Helicopters.

39 INT. STEVEN’S HOTEL ROOM – THE NEXT DAY 39

There is a knock at the door. Steven sits up
In bed. He rubs his head. Steven gets up to
Answer the door. It is Meghan.

They embrace.

STEVEN
Meghan! It’s so good to
See you!

MEGHAN
Steven, are you all right?

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STEVEN
I’m sorry about missing you
Last night. I just suddenly
Got so sleepy.

MEGHAN
(jokingly)
Too many drinks, uh?

STEVEN
No, not really. Got to
Talking with some fellow
At the bar. Raphael, Raphael
Something.

MEGHAN
(in shock)
Raphael? Wha did you
Talk about?

STEVEN
I know you Meghan, what’s wrong?

MEGHAN
What did you talk about?

STEVEN
Helicopters…

MEGHAN
Helicopters?

STEAVEN
Yeah, you know. The heli-
Copters that the U.N. has
Allowed for crop dusting. Oh,
No…

MEGHAN
What?

STEVEN
Well, he asked where they were
Located? Why would he do that
Meghan? Why…

Meghan sits there on the bed in shock.

MEGHAN
We’ve got to stop him Steven.
We’ve got to stop him!




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40 EXT. DESERT NEAR BAGHDAD, IRAQ – MILITARY BASE - 40
HANGER – DAY

Raphael and the Satanist drive up to the military
             Hanger in a jeep.

JERRY
Man, the SuperCobra! That baby
Can hover Out of Ground Effect at
914 m with four TOW and four HELLFIRE
  missiles, full turrent ammunition and
rockers… with power to spare. The
SuperCobra can take off and climb out
At more than 4.1 m/sec on only one engine.
The SuperCobra has been marinized against
Harsh environments like salt water and
Desert sand. Armor protections surround
The crew. The tuel system itself is designed
To survice direct 23mm shell hits. And
Detection and countermeasure systems
Include: dual radar warning, infrared
Jammers, dual chaff dispensers, even
Infrared reflective paint.

RAPHAEL
I am impressed. How come you know
So much?

JERRY
I flew that baby in Desert Storm!
During Desert Storm SuperCobras flew
More than three times the number of hours
Per aircraft per month than any other
Attack helicopter. Man, you should have
Been there. The air… The air was
Filled with black burning oil and blowing
Sand. The SuperCobra destroyed 97 tanks,
104 armored personnel carriers and vehicles,
16 bunkers and two antiaircraft artillery
sites.

RAPHAEL
I am impressed. You’re my man.

JERRY
(serious)
In a fight, there isn’t any such
Thing as second place…

RAPHAEL
You don’t know how true…

41 EXT. ON THE ROAD TO BAGHDAD, IRAQ – DAY 41

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Raphael and Jerry are flying the stolen crop duster
Helicopter to Baghdad. Jerry pilots.

42. EXT. A DESERT ROAD OUTSIDE BAGHDAD, IRAQ 42

Meghan and Steven are driving on a desert road
Outside Baghdad, Iraq.

MEGHAN
Steven, there is something that
Ive got to tell you.

They are driving a jeep and Steven cannot hear
Meghan.

STEVEN
What, Meghan, I can’t hear you.

MEGHAN
Steven, there is something that
I want to tell you.

Steven shakes his head. He cannot hear her.

MEGHAN
I’m pregnant.

She looks at Steven and shouts.

MEGHAN
I’m pregnant!

They are silent. The only sound is the wind. The camera
Pans towards the storm which seems to be following them.

43 INT. HELICOPTER – DESERT OUTSIDE BAGHDAD, IRAQ – DAY 43

The storm seems to be gaining momentum. Jerry
Looks back at it quite often. Raphael is not
Bothered.

JERRY
Wow, that is some storm coming
This way. It sure came up all of
A sudden. I can even feel the
Electricity in the air. Weird.

Raphael snaps his fingers at Jerry.

RAPHAEL
Hey. Hey. Don’t start freaking
Out on me. I need you to focus.

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JERRY
And exactly what am I focusing on
Raphael. One day I’m a happy Satanist
From Houston, the next day, I am flying
A stolen Iraquie Helicopter on my way
To a secret germ warfare facility outside
Baghdad, Iraq. You know, I have some
Knowledge of the Occult, Raphael. Meager
Though it may be. Whatever you have in
Mind, whoever you really are, whatever
You really are, I want it known to the
Gods and heavens above, that I am not
Here of my own free will. I’d lost track
Of that the minute I laid eyes on you
Raphael. Archangel Raphael. Boy,
You must have really pissed God off.

RAPHAEL
No, but he really pissed me off.

The storm is really brewing now. Lightning rends the
Air. Jerry concentrates on keeping the helicopter
Flying evenly.

RAPHAEL
Yeah, he really pissed me off…

Raphael looks out the helicopter’s window at the germ
Warfare facility that was previously shown on CNN.

RAPHAEL
And as for your free will that God
Gave you. Just look at what you Monkeys
Have done with it. Armageddon, my friend.
Armageddon.

The camera pans over the huge, evil looking facility

JERRY
My God. My God.

A sudden, loud lightning bolt explodes from the heavens.
Raphael closes his eyes.

44 INT. RAPHAEL’S BEDROOM – HEAVEN – AGES AGO - 44
MORNING

Raphael is asleep in his bed. His eyes are closed.
Suddenly, a huge lightning bolt rends the air. He sits
Up in bed startled. SATAN sits on his bed beside him.

SATAN

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SATAN (CONT’D)
A bad dream?

RAPHAEL
Yes, I’ve lost count lately.

SATAN
What is it that troubles you
In your dreams.

RAPHAEL
A feeling that I’m falling. That
I’m falling to the ends of the Heavens.
There is no hand to hold me. To save
Me.

SATAN
Raphael, I am your best friend
In all the Heavens. You may always
Count on my hand to save you, friend.
You can count on it. From the be-
Ginning of Creation, I have been there
For you. I will be there at it’s end
For you. I pledge this to you. Now,
Away with these dreams!

Satan pulls Raphael up by a very strong grip, almost
Out of bed.

SATAN
Now, let’s be off to supper. I’m
Starved. And there is one pretty
Angel of the fairer sex, that I
Want to share my meal. Let’s be
Off!

Raphael laughs, but looks out the bedroom window, as a
Storm races across Heaven. Lightning bolts hit various
Buildings and the far away mountains.

RAPHAEL
You have my word, Satan, old
Friend. No more talk of cala-
Mities in dreams. Nor visions.

45 EXT. HEAVEN – GARDEN WALK – DAY 45

Raphael and Satan are walking down a beautiful garden
Path. Up ahead is the lovely FEMALE ANGEL. She is
Walking with a MALE ANGEL. She laughs and flirts with
The male angel. She looks back and seeing Satan, becomes
Even more flirtatious with the male angel. The male angel

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looks back and sees Satan. He looks angry. He puts
his arm around the female angel.

Satan is becoming very angry. Raphael can tell this
And puts out an arm to restrain Satan.

SATAN
Take your arm away Raphael.

RAPHAEL
I beg you, reconsider, Satan.
Our God would be ashamed of your
Actions.

SATAN
Raphael, I love this girl. I
Can’t tolerate her being with a
Mere angel. For I am an Archangel.
Beloved of God, Beautiful Dawn, as
God himself named me.

RAPHAEL
I beg you friend. Do not harm
That angel. He is one of God’s
Creatures, as are we all. There
Is much fear in my heart for you
Satan.

Satan runs up to the couple. The male angel and
Satan push each other. Somehow, the male angel
Accidentally pushes the female angel. Satan becomes
Outraged. He takes a silver knife from his belt,
And stabs the male angel in the stomach.

The celestial song stops. There are a few seconds of
Silence. Then a weeping song begins to play all over
Heaven.

Satan looks down at the dead body. The female angel
Covers the body with hers and weeps. It is obvious to
Satan that she loved the male angel.

Satan drops his silver knife and flees.

46 EXT. MOUNTAIN – HEAVEN – NIGHT

A large bonfire has been lit. Satan and Angels which
Have gone with Satan to support him, sit around the fire.

SATAN
Friends, words cannot say
What your support means to me

CONTINUED

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SATAN (CONT’D)
This hour.

ANGEL
Satan, we will plead your case
To God. We will plead for His
Mercy on your behalf. He loves
You still.

SATAN
Tell me friends, does God have
Love for me equal to Adam and
The rest of the Monkeys? Will
He have the same mercy for me
As he does for them?

ANGEL
He loves us Satan.

ANOTHER ANGEL
You know, Brother, that his love for us isn’t
Equal to his love for the monkeys.

ANGELS
(in unison)
How true, how true.

There is the music of weeping angels filling the air.

ANGEL
Then what are we to do? What
Is to be done?

SATAN
Fight!

Suddenly, GOD’S SOLDIERS rush the Angels. The Soldiers
Kill many of the Angels. Several Angels shield Satan.,
Trying to hide him.

The Soldiers drag off the Angels and Satan.

Raphael, who has been hiding in the crowd, falls to his
Knees. He weeps.

RAPHAEL
Satan! Satan! Mercy,
Mercy.

47 EXT. GOD’S THRONE – HEAVEN – NIGHT 47

The captured Angels and Satan are dragged before God’s

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47 CONTINUED 47

throne. Satan is dragged out first and placed before
God.

SATAN
I ask for mercy, not only
For myself, high and mighty
God, but for the other Angels.
Who, for their friendship to
Me did help.

GOD
Mercy? Satan, how can you ask
For mercy. You’ve killed a fellow
Angel. A thing of God. A brother.

SATAN
I kneel before the throne. I beg
Forgiveness. I give up my shame
To the cosmos. I accept responsibility
For this angel’s murder. Pardon
The other angels. Their friendship
For me clouded their mind.

GOD
You speak from your heart Satan.
You speak well. You will be
Punished. No Angel is exempt
From Heaven’s law.

SATAN
Except for the Monkeys that you
Love so much. Adam’s Clan. In
Spite of their inadequacies.

There rises a cheer from the Angels watching this
Trial.

GOD
Step forward Satan and receive
Your punishment.

Satan steps forward.

GOD
I cast you out into blackness.
Where love from God cannot
Find you. Nor salvation, will
Await you. And into an eternity so
Fathomless you cannot even mark
The hour.

A light surrounds Satan. He sees Raphael in the crowd and

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smiles at him. Suddenly, Satan’s body begins to change.
He is dressed in a hood. He has a hump on his back. He
Is all dressed in black. His body is dragged upwards until
It disappears into the Heavens.

The other ANGELS are surrounded by the light and they change
Into the same black figured. A light drags them off into the
Heavens.

All the Angels, in stunned disbelief leave the throne.
Only Raphael remains. He looks up into the fathomless
Heavens.

RAPHAEL
I held my head down in sorrow
That night. Sorrow, that I knew for
Certain God loved the Monkeys more
Than his own Angels. More than his
Morning Star. More than me.
I who have knelt before the throne
In adoration since Creation, faced
This sad truth. God loved Man more
Than his Angels. I vowed, that night
To put an end to Adam’s Clan, the
Monkeys. And then, who would God have
To love, but his devoted Angels. Created
Out of thought, loved once beyond time.
(Raphael hangs his head)
And now come to this.

48 INT. CAVERN – BY THE RIVER STYX – NIGHT 48

Satan suddenly appears in a flash. He has been
Thrown out of Heaven. He is very sad. He hangs
His head in sorrow.

CHARON is the old ferry man who ferries the dead
Across the River Styx. The River Styx separates
The world of the living from the world of the dead.

Charon paddles up to Satan.

CHARON
Satan, exhiled from Heaven
I am Charon, the ferry man.
I ferry the dead across the
River Styx. This river separates
The world of the living, from the
World of the dead.

Satan meekly gets into the boat. Charon rows
Away.



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49 INT. CAVERN – ON THE RIVER STYX – VARIOUS 49
SHOTS – NIGHT

Satan and Charon float down the River Styx.
From across the far bank, there are
Hundreds of red eyes that watch them in the
Darkness.

SATAN
Ah, woe is me, oh,
Archangel Satan, once
Beloved of our God,
Kneeler at the Throne
Of Heaven, come to this.
Ah, woe…

50 INT. THE BANK OF THE RIVER STYX – NIGHT 50

Suddenly, Charon brings the boat up
To the river bank.

SATAN
Why are we stopping?

CHARON
Time to get out. Others
To fetch. I go no further
Than this place between the
Worlds. Between the world
Of the living and the world
Of the dead. You must make
Your way to The Land of Damna-
Tion, on foot.

SATAN
But, I have no guide to show
Me the way.

Charon ignores him and turns the boat around,
Leaving Satan alone in a black, cavernous world.

51 INT. CAVERN – AT THE BANK OF THE RIVER STYX - 51

Satan has built a fire. We can see thousands of
Red eyes glowing in the pitch black darkness.

Satan takes a rock and throws it at the red eyes.

LILLITH
(voice over)
Ouch!

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SATAN
Who’s there. Show yourself
Now!

Out of the darkness, walks LILLITH, a beautiful
Woman. She has red eyes that glow in the dark,
Like a cat’s.

SATAN
Who are you?

LILLITH
Lillith.

SATAN
You are beautiful. You
Live here? In this awful
Place.

LILLITH
Let me be your guide. Let
Me show you all the wonder
And magick of this God for-
Saken place.

The red eyes surrounding them, seem to advance
On them. Satan and Lillith hold on to each other
And escape into the blackness.

52 INT. CAVERNOUS MOUNTAIN – THE RIVER STYX ON THE 52
WAY TO HELL

Satan and Lillith walk along the river leading to
Hell. Lillith suddenly jumps in. There are fishes,
Very large with fins. She is having a lot of fun.

LILLITH
Jump in Satan. It’s fun!

Satan jumps in and catches a fin. He is having
A lot of fun. Suddenly, the fish dives under,
Taking Satan with it!

After a few seconds, without Satan resurfacing
Lillith dives in to try to rescue Satan.

A few seconds later, both Lillith and Satan
Emerge to the surface. Both are sputtering
Out water.

SATAN
Why did it do that?


CONTINUED

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LILLITH
It knows who you are.

53` FURTHER DOWN THE RIVER STYX – NIGHT 53

Satan and Lillith sit around a campfire. They
Are drying their clothes. There is the cry of
Wild animals in the distance.

SATAN
Won’t they stop with all
That accursed noise!

LILLITH
We need to get you safely
To Hell, before they eat
You, you know?

SATAN
Eat me! They want to eat
Me?

LILLITH
Don’t be such a crybaby.
All you do is complain. I
Expected more.

SATAN
More, you mean, from the
High and Mighty Archangel
Satan.

LILLITH
Yes, but then, I always
Say, never meet your heroes.

Lillith rolls over by the fire and goes to sleep.
The growling sounds continue. Satan pulls his robes
Around him.

SATAN
Raphael, if only you could
See me now.

Red eyes advance on Satan, frightening him, and then
Dart away.

Satan hangs his head. Lillith purrs in her sleep
Like a cat.

54 A DESCENDING MOUNTAIN ON THE ROAD TO HELL 54

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Satan and Lillith are climbing down a very steep
Mountain road. The road becomes more and more steep.

Both Lillith and Satan must use their hands in order
To climb down the mountain.

55 INT. MOUNTAIN CAVE – NIGHT 55

Lillith and Satan are seeking shelter in a cave.
Satan covers his head and weeps.

SATAN
What am I, an Archangel
Of God, for Heaven’s sake,
Doing on this God Forsaken
Mountain.

LILLITH
Stop whining. All you do
Is whine.

Suddenly, above, thousands of red eyed bats
(their eyes are, of course, up side down), open
their eyes.

SATAN
Lillith, what in Purgatory,
Is that?

LILLITH
Bats! Blood sucking bats!

The bats bare their fangs and in thousands, chase
Satan and Lillith out of the cave. They have no
Choice, but to jump. They run outside.

56 INT. MOUNTAIN CAVE 56

Satan and Lillith stand on the narrow, rocky precipice
Outside the cave entrance.

Thousands of bats swarm around them. They have no
Choice, but to jump. They hold hands and jump from
The mountain.

Satan and Lillith fall through the air. Suddenly,
Satan opens his wings and catches Lillith.

The bats pursue them.

57 EXT. APPLE ORCHARD – HELL 57

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The bats pursue them.

SATAN
Perhaps we can hide in that
Apple orchard.

LILLITH
Good idea. Fly!

The bats fly onwards, not pursuing Satan and
Lillith.

Satan and Lillith hold each other as the bats fly
Off overhead.

SATAN
Say, these are apple trees.
Those apples look pretty good.
I’m so hungry!

LILLITH
Here, let me pick one for you.

Lillith scuttles up a tree, with amazing agility.
She selects a nice apple. She polishes it on her
Sleeve.

Lillith scuttles down the tree. She gives the apple
To Satan.

Satan takes a bite out of it.

Lillith holds her breath as she watches Satan eat the
Apple.

Satan takes one bite of it, and spits it out.
He falls to the ground.

SATAN
You, Lillith, what have you
Done to me. I am an Archangel
Of God.

Satan’s eyes are now red and look like those of a cat.
They glow in the darkness.

Lillith is delighted. She claps her hands and jumps
Up and down.

LILLITH
This would have happened
Sooner or later, Satan.

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LILLITH (CONT’D)
This is the only fruit
That grows here.

SATAN
I was once a mighty Arch-
Angel, loved by God. ‘Till
One day, I made a terrible
Mistake and lost my place,
Kneeling at the Throne of
Heaven. Cast out of Heaven,
Imprisoned here in a darkness
So vast, a soul could drown
In it. But, now I can see,
And with my new eyes, Lillith
I will see what this new
World can offer.

Satan brings Lillith to him and kisses her
Passionately.

58 THE ROAD LEADING TO HELL 58

Satan, looking very stately, in expensive robes,
Stands before The Road Leading to Hell.

As those condemned to an eternity in Hell, walk
Down this road, their sins echo from their foot-

 

 

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