Window-Shopping (5)
I still cant get over what you said! It was amazing!
LAURIE Yeah, so amazing that it probably got me fired again.
ANGELA Possibly got you fired, and anyway, what does that matter right now?
LAURIE But we still dont know what he wanted to say, or even when
ANGELA Laurie, if you want those dreams of yours to come true, youve got
LAURIE and ANGELA enter Rays Coffee-House.
52. INT. RAYS COFFEE-HOUSE. DAY.
ANGELA and LAURIE enter the coffee-house. It is very busy, and there is
ANGELA Laurie, look, theres that Mr. Harding of yours. Whos he
LAURIE I dont know, but Im going to say hello. There are two seats
LAURIE and ANGELA make their way through the coffee-house towards MR.
MR. HARDING Laurie! Angela! Its nice to see you, girls. Sit down, wont
LAURIE Thanks, Mr. Harding.
MARK suddenly realises what MR. HARDING has just said, and looks up
MARK Laurie!
LAURIE (Surprised) Yes?
MARK Its me, Mark Hammond. Jeffs friend.
LAURIE recognises MARK.
LAURIE Oh my God!
MARK Jeffs been talking about you non-stop. Well, what he knows,
LAURIE (Incredulously) Hes been talking about me?
MARK Yes, so he was rather cut up when you said you didnt want to see
MR. HARDING Laurie! Why dyou say that, love? I thought you liked him.
LAURIE I never said that!
MARK Well, no, not to his face, granted, but you left the message with the
LAURIE I think theres been a huge mistake here; my message was my phone
MARK Whos Samantha?
ANGELA Thats got to be it! What the hell does she think shes doing?
MARK Pauline? Shes the one who came here when it was supposed to be
LAURIE You mean hes still coming here? I thought you said he didnt
MARK He always comes here, he likes it, and at the moment, Id say
LAURIE Hang on, what time does his train get in?
MARK looks at his watch.
MARK In about half an hour. Why?
LAURIE I want to meet him at the station.
ANGELA But you might as well stay here.
LAURIE Im not letting Pauline even have a chance to see him. The old
MARK Thats a nice speech, Laurie, but youd better get going;
ANGELA Ill drive.
MARK Ill make sure Pauline sticks around long enough to see you and
MARK hands LAURIE his card, and then settles down with the remains of
LAURIE Mr. Harding? Are you staying here, or coming with us?
MR. HARDING Staying. I dont want to slow you down chasing after this bloke, ANGELA Come on, lets go!
ANGELA and LAURIE hurry out of the coffee-house.
53. EXT. ROAD. DAY.
ANGELA and LAURIE are sitting in a car. They are waiting in a long
54. INT. ANGELAS CAR. DAY.
ANGELA is impatiently tapping her steering wheel, as LAURIE leans out
LAURIE Were not going to make it!
ANGELA Calm down, Ill get us there. Weve still got time.
ANGELA pulls out into another lane of traffic, ignoring the horns of
55. INT. RAYS COFFEE-HOUSE. DAY.
MARK and MR. HARDING are sitting at their table in the coffee-house.
MARK This is exciting, isnt it?
MR. HARDING Exciting?
MARK Yes; thwarting the evil villain, and getting the hero and heroine
MR. HARDING I think youve had too much coffee, son.
MARK laughs.
MARK Well, while were waiting for the wicked witch to turn up, I may as
MR. HARDING No thanks. My liquid intake is smaller than yours; I can only take a
MARK (Good-humouredly) Light weight!
MARK leaves the table to go and order his coffee at the counter. While
MR. HARDING From that way that shes just managed to upset that little
MARK Pauline Haslam. She certainly looks disagreeable enough.
MR. HARDING Before you spend your time watching someone youre not supposed to,
MR. HARDING stands, and shakes hands with MARK.
MR. HARDING Good luck, son. The fate of the universe may not rest on your shoulders,
MARK Thanks, Mr. Harding.
MR. HARDING walks in the direction of the door, and just as he is about
PAULINE Can I help you?
MR. HARDING Pauline? Pauline, love, dont you remember me?
PAULINE Remember you?
MR. HARDING You are Pauline, arent you?
PAULINE Yes, but I dont believe weve ever met. How do you know my
MR. HARDING Of course weve met; it was at your brothers wedding.
PAULINE (Annoyed) Look, I dont have a brother, and I dont know of
MR. HARDING feigns confusion.
MR. HARDING Wait a minute; you are Pauline Brown, arent you?
PAULINE No I most certainly am not! My name is Pauline Haslam.
MR. HARDING Oh, sorry, I thought you were someone else.
MR. HARDING turns to the door once more, leaving PAULINE utterly
56. EXT. STATION. DAY.
ANGELA speeds into the car park of the station and parks her car
LAURIE Start looking!
ANGELA But I dont know what he looks like!
LAURIE Im beginning to think this may not have been the best plan of
ANGELA What happened to the new, improved Laurie Taylor?
LAURIE Turns out she wasnt so improved after all. Quick, if we go to the
LAURIE runs off, and ANGELA rolls her eyes, then follows at a much
LAURIE Thats him! In that taxi!
ANGELA Tasty!
LAURIE Thats not helping, Angela!
ANGELA holds the card that MARK gave them up to show LAURIE, and then
57. INT. RAYS COFFEE-HOUSE. DAY.
MARK is still sitting at the same table, looking incredibly bored, and
MARK Hello?
Wait, Angela! Calm down!
Yes, shes sitting
MARK puts the phone into his jacket pocket and stands. He makes his way
MARK Excuse me, are you Pauline?
PAULINE God, not again!
MARK My names Mark, Im Jeffs secretary. He just called me-
PAULINE So it was you who disturbed the peace with that God-awful noise!
MARK (Through his teeth) Ah, yes, sorry about that.
PAULINE So, what did Jeff say?
MARK Yes, I was getting to that. He said hed left a message on your
PAULINE No, I didnt get it. Its just a lucky coincidence that
MARK Oh, Jeffs a lucky man, all right.
PAULINE Im assuming there was some sort of message for me?
MARK Hes in Manchester.
PAULINE stands, angrily.
PAULINE (Shouting) What? What the hell is he doing in Manchester?
MARK nervously clears his throat.
MARK There was a very important meeting; he couldnt get out of it. He
PAULINE He wants me to go up there?
MARK Yeah. (Pause) The company will pay for it, of course!
PAULINE Oh, well in that case, I might
Ill have to go home and pack.
MARK Me? But Ive got to-
PAULINE Are you arguing with me? I said you would drive me, and so you will!
MARK (Obediently) All right if itll get you up there, Ill take
MARK follows PAULINE as she strides out of the coffee-house. DANIELLE
58. EXT. STREET OUTSIDE RAYS. EVENING.
A taxi pulls up outside Rays Coffee-House. JEFF gets out of the
59. EXT. STATION. EVENING.
MARK is standing on the platform, watching as PAULINE gets onto the
MARK Have a nice trip!
PAULINE turns around and glares at MARK. She sits down as the train
MARK Thank God shes gone!
A WOMAN behind MARK gasps at what he has just said.
MARK (Seriously) Dont be shocked; that was only my wife. How would you
WOMAN Pig!
The WOMAN turns her back on MARK and angrily walks away. MARK laughs to
60. EXT. STREET OUTSIDE RAYS COFFEE-HOUSE. EVENING.
ANGELAS car comes to a screeching halt outside of Rays.
ANGELA Are you all right?
LAURIE Im more nervous than I can remember being in my life before, but
ANGELA Go on, then. Good luck!
ANGELA drives away to park her car, and LAURIE walks up to the door.
61. INT. RAYS COFFEE-HOUSE. EVENING.
JEFF does not notice LAURIE as she walks towards him. She reaches his
LAURIE Dont frown; you never know whos falling in love with your
JEFF looks up, surprised to see LAURIE.
JEFF What are you doing here?
LAURIE Well, if you remember, a little while ago you promised me a coffee. I
JEFF But I thought you didnt want to see me.
LAURIE (Crest-fallen) Oh, I understand now. Of course, I didnt know the She stands.
JEFF (Confused) Are you all right?
LAURIE (Putting on her coat) Im fine. Dont flatter yourself; many
JEFF Who said anything about rejection?
LAURIE I dont understand. You just said-
JEFF I just said I was surprised to see you. I didnt say I was unhappy
LAURIE (Sitting down) Really?
JEFF Really. So, do you want that coffee now?
LAURIE smiles.
We cut to:
62. EXT. STREET OUTSIDE RAYS COFFEE-HOUSE. EVENING.
ANGELA is standing outside Rays. She is looking through the
MARK How long have you been here?
ANGELA (Quietly) Oh, not long.
MARK How are they doing?
ANGELA (Smiling) Just fine.
MARK and ANGELA watch for a moment in silence.
MARK So, I was just wondering
I know this little restaurant not far
ANGELA I suppose I do deserve to have a meal bought for me, dont I?
MARK Most definitely.
MARK holds out his arm, and ANGELA takes it, laughing. They walk away
63. EXT. PARK. DAY.
LAURIE is still sitting on the bench we left her on when she began to
LAURIE (V.O.) Its true that many people dont believe in fate, and
JEFF reaches LAURIE, and they begin to walk away, holding hands.
LAURIE (V.O.) And in my story, just like in all good fairy tales, we all lived happily
FADE TO BLACK
THE END
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