The Dominion (6)
Melissa M Cook

 


Just listen.

RAMIRA plays the tape.

GOONEY

Whoa, that's sick! So uh, I guess you took my advice and recordin' right?

RAMIRA

Yea, yea, it's a diss track to Lady El, just somethin' fun. Went to a free rec--

GOONEY

Yo I heard you busted her ear open last night.

(beat)

RAMIRA

Who told you?

GOONEY

Sharice.

RAMIRA

Oh.

RAMIRA looks down.

GOONEY

What's wrong?

RAMIRA

Oh, nothin'.

GOONEY looks confused.

RAMIRA

I'ma go head and go though. Just wanted to show you right quick.

INT. girl's bathroom - day

SHARICE walks in the bathroom, puts on lip gloss and fixes her hair. RAMIRA walks in and pauses. SHARICE doesn't pay any attention. Ignores.

RAMIRA

Hey.

SHARICE

Hey.

RAMIRA

How're you?

SHARICE

Good. You?

RAMIRA

Good. Made a demo tape.

SHARICE

That's nice.

(long beat)

RAMIRA

(sigh)

Reese, I'm sorry 'bout the otha day. Didn't mean it like that--

SHARICE doesn't make eye contact.

RAMIRA (cont)

Was just mad.

SHARICE hugs her tight. Catches her off guard.

SHARICE

It's cool, don't worry 'bout it girl. I apologize too. We cool?

RAMIRA

Yea, thanks. Aye look made a tape, at that studio. Just feel this is my only way.

SHARICE

Whatchu mean?

(beat)

RAMIRA

Fired from my job the other day.

SHARICE

Really?

RAMIRA

Yea, like I'm serious now! Like I'ma go out and do it!

SHARICE

That's what I'm talkin' bout!

RAMIRA

I feel this is my only way out, my only choice out this shit hole. From work, to family to school. This is all I have.

RAMIRA pulls out her mini boombox and plays it outloud.

CUT TO:

Bathroom stall. SHEISTY, she overhears the tape outloud. She sits on the toilet smirking, listening.

CUT BACK TO:

SHARICE

Oh damn, that's sick!

RAMIRA

Thanks, same thing Ramone and Gooney said.

SHEISTY comes out the stall, washing hands.

sheisty

Aye, who is that?

RAMIRA

Oh, uh, that's me.

SHEISTY

Really, that's dope.

(beat)

RAMIRA and SHARICE look at each other.

RAMIRA

Thanks.

SHEISTY

I know this dude who works at the radio, he does this thing called, "Underground Airplay", and airs indie or unsigned artists songs.

RAMIRA

Oh really?

SHEISTY

Yea. Sometimes he has artists get on the radio and does a freestyle. Good promotion if you tryna get your name out there.

RAMIRA looks at SHARICE.

RAMIRA

Cool. I'm in.

SHEISTY

Aight, I'ma let 'em know.

SHEISTY grabs the tape and smirks as she's leaving.

EXT. ABANDONED HOUSE - NIGHT

GOONEY, RAMIRA, SHARICE and ANGELO are all outside this abandoned house. This building is run down. Beat, scary, windows broken.

SHARICE

Man, I can't believe this house still standin'.

GOONEY

I heard someone died in there.

SHARICE

Nigga, ain't nobody died in there.

GOONEY

Wanna bet? Also heard some dude got raped in there by another dude.

(beat)

SHARICE just looks at GOONEY. RAMIRA just laughs. ANGELO looks at RAMIRA up and down. Everyone bursts out laughing, pushing GOONEY around.

int. abandoned house - night

Everyone goes in and destroys the house. They take spray cans and spray paint graffiti all inside, busting windows, throwing things. Laughs and giggles all through out. We hear the music building intensity. Scene is going haywire, fast motion.

Couches and furniture being thrown around, kids cussing for a moment. There's flashing lights and sirens. Everyone stops and stares. Everyone rushes out. GOONEY's foot gets stuck.

GOONEY

Shit ya'll, I'm stuck.

ANGELO

It's 5-0, everybody out!

RAMIRA

Wait! Gotta get Goons!

RAMIRA helps him out.

police

Hey, who the hell's in here?

Everyone darts out the way and exits out the back door.

POLICE

Hey, they were just here.

SHARICE

RUN!

EXT. BASKETBALL COURT - NIGHT

The gang runs and ends up being in the park near the basketball court. They goof around. Main music fades out. RAMIRA and ANGELO sit on a park bench while GOONEY and SHARICE run around chasing each other.

ANGELO

Hey.

RAMIRA

Hey.

RAMIRA and ANGELO are nervous. He rubs his head.

ANGELO

How's everything?

RAMIRA

Good. How's everything with you?

ANGELO

Good.

(beat)

ANGELO

Um, about that kiss the other night.

RAMIRA

I know, I wasn't expecting it.

ANGELO

I know, um, I'm sorry if I uh, came onto you too fast, couldn't help it.

RAMIRA

No, no, uh, don't be I really liked it a lot actually.

ANGELO

Really?

RAMIRA

Yea, um, you know I hope it doesn't make anything between us awkward?

ANGELO

No, you crazy. You'll always be my best friend.

RAMIRA smiles. GOONEY and SHARICE goof around and act a fool.

RAMIRA

Same here.

RAMIRA

Oh yea, I got free studio time.

ANGELO

Really? How?

RAMIRA

Was here with Sharice and this studio owner approached me to record some stuff after he heard me spit. This girl at school said she can get my shit played on the radio too, called 'Underground Airplay'.

ANGELO

Oh word, that's dope. Happy for you. Never heard of 'Underground Airplay'.

RAMIRA

Me either, must be somethin' new.

They hug.

CUT TO: BOOG's basement.

The gang goes downstairs and set up. Weed smoke fills the room. They talk shit. SHEISTY walks downstairs.

SHEISTY

Aye look.

LADY EL

Aye, sup?

LUCIOUS

'Sup.

SHEISTY

(laughing)

I gotta surprise for ya'll.

CANO CREW

Surprise?

LADY EL

What is it?

SHEISTY

Just listen.

SHEISTY plays RAMIRA's record and the diss track to the CANO CREW. The look on LADY EL's face looks like she wants to fight. Teeth clenched. Everyone looks stunned.

SHEISTY

Ramira "aka" Uniq. I was in the bathroom stall and overheard her and Sharice talkin' and they played the record.

LADY EL

And--

SHEISTY

And, I lied and said I'd take this tape to the radio and let them play it.

CHANELLE FOXX laughs.

LADY EL

Damn!

CUT TO:

INT. ramira's living room - night

RAMIRA enters the door and CARLOS is sitting on the couch eating an apple in his boxers and wife beater. RAMIRA doesn't say anything. She's washing dishes. He continues to watch her.

rico

So, what's up baby? Why you always so quiet when I'm around?

RAMIRA doesn't turn around.

(beat)

rico

What's wrong, say somethin'?

RAMIRA

Where's my mom?

rico

She's out, she'll be back. Just you and me right now baby.

CARLOS gets up and walks over to RAMIRA. He walks behind her and touches her hair.

rico

Mmm, smells good.

RAMIRA

Look get off a me you pervert!

She knock's the apple out of RICO's hand.

rico

What's wrong?

RAMIRA

I said get the fuck off a me, you fuckin' pervert!

CARLOS grabs her and RAMIRA smacks him as soon as CARMEN walks in.

(long beat)

carmen

What the hell?

CARMEN comes back with groceries. She's stunned at what she's seeing.

carmen

(yelling)

What the hell is goin' on?

RAMIRA

Mom, it's not what it looks like. He kept touchin' and grabbin' me!

rico

No I didn't. I asked her a question ans she slaps me for no reason!

CARMEN looks at both of them.

RAMIRA

(tears)

You really gonna believe him mom?

carmen

Get out.

RAMIRA

Mom.

CARMEN

I said get the fuck out!

(beat)

RAMIRA walks out not saying a word.

INT. sharice's room - night

RAMIRA knocks on the door.

SHARICE

Hey girl, sup?.

RAMIRA

Um, nothin'. Can I stay the night?

SHARICE

Yea, I don't think my parents'll mind. What happened?

RAMIRA

Mom kicked me out.

SHARICE

What?

RAMIRA

Yea, her boyfriend kept touchin' me, I slapped him when mom came in. She didn't believe me and she kicked me out.

SHARICE

Oh geez!

RAMIRA has a scared look on her face. Her and SHARICE go to bed and RAMIRA sleeps on her couch.

fade out:

EXT. sidewalk - evening

It's raining heavy. RAMIRA runs and spots SHEISTY walking down the street. She's walking fast and turns a corner. She notices RAMIRA after her. She walks faster.

RAMIRA

Hey, Sheist.

She grabs her shoulder.

RAMIRA

Hey, did you give my tape to that guy?

sheisty

Nah, not yet.

RAMIRA

Well?

SHEISTY keeps walking, trying to get away from RAMIRA.

SHEISTY

Well what?

RAMIRA

So when you gon' do it? You promised me remember?

SHEISTY

Promised? I ain't promise you nothin', I said I'd do it--

(beat)

SHEISTY (cont)

Look, I been busy lately, aight?

RAMIRA

If you can't do it, could I have my tape back!

SHEISTY

Look, meet me at the court tonight and I give you ya tape back.

RAMIRA

Oh, ok, yea. I be there!

SHEISTY starts walking faster and jogging. RAMIRA just stares. RAMIRA runs the opposite direction.

INT. RAMIRA'S BEDROOM - MORNING

RAMIRA awakens from the sun. She's getting up to go to the kitchen. She see's RICO laying on the couch. He awakens. RAMIRA doesn't notice. RICO awakens slowly and puts a knife to RAMIRA's neck.

RICO

Mmm, you smell so good. Been wanting to do this for awhile.

He unbuckles his belt and pants. RAMIRA knocks the knife out of his hands quickly.

RAMIRA

What the fuck yo?

The knife falls to the floor. They start pushing and shoving. They brawl. RAMIRA pushes RICO. CARLOS grabs RAMIRA.

RAMIRA

AH! Get off of me you sick bastard!

RAMIRA starts crying and screaming. CARMEN is awaken by this and come's rushing out of the room.

CARMEN

(yelling)

Hey, hey, what the fucks goin' on in here?!

RAMIRA

(yelling)

Mom, help! He's trying to rape me. He put a knife to me!

CARMEN grabs CARLOS and he smacks CARMEN. She falls to the ground leaving her a cut lip. She touches her lip, it's bleeding.

RAMIRA

Look! Don't fuckin' touch my mother like that bitch!

RAMIRA picks up a knife and threatens RICO.

carlos

(to Carmen)

You're such a fuckin' joke, Such a good for nothin' bitch! You're worthless!

RAMIRA beats RICO, kicks him in the nuts. CARMEN gets up. She's crying. Stressed. Bleeding. Black eye. She's very stern.

CARMEN

(yelling)

I loved you, I was everything and you wanna come in here and touch my daughter? You sick bastard, sick, sick bastard!

CARMEN takes a pot of boiling beans and throws it on RICO. He stings and burns.

RICO

(screams)

AHHH!

He dashes out of the door and doesn't come back.

(long beat)

RAMIRA looks at CARMEN and they run over and hug each other tight on the floor. They're both crying.

CARMEN

I'm sorry baby. I really am.

(beat)

RAMIRA

(breathing hard)

It's ok mom.

CARMEN

I love you.

CARMEN kisses RAMIRA on the forehead.

RAMIRA

I love you too.

fade to:

EXT. basketball court - night

RAMIRA sits on a park bench waiting for SHEISTY.

CUT TO: INT. CAR:

SHEISTY

(to Lady El)

Aye, there she go right there.

CUT BACK TO:

The CANO CREW pull's up in a car slowly, bumping music. RAMIRA lifts up her head and doesn't realize it's them. They all get out of the car. RAMIRA's stunned.

LADY EL

'sup bitch, ready to get ya wig split?

CANO CREW justs laughs. RAMIRA stands there stiff.

LADY EL

Guess what I have? Sheisty told us you'd be here.

LADY EL flashes RAMIRA's tape in her face. RAMIRA tries to grab it.

RAMIRA

(yelling)

You set me up Sheist!

SHEISTY just stands there looking scared.

CHANELLE FOXX

We heard the shit you spit about us ho.

LADY EL

Yea, and we aint' like it.

LADY EL smacks RAMIRA to the ground. She falls hard. Her nose is bleeding. They laugh. JAZZY O kicks her, so do the other members. They grab her and drag her. SHEISTY sits back smirking, crossing her arms.

They put her on top of a car and beat her. LADY EL keeps beating her. SHEISTY steps in.

SHEISTY

Ok, ok, guys stop it, let her live, let her live!

They look at her and slowly pull away. LADY EL spits on her as they leave. They get in the car and drive away while leaving her on the ground. RAMIRA coughs and in serious agony.

cut to:

INT. gooney's basement - night

Smoking, drinking. Music. Laughter. Everyone sits around. RAMIRA walks in.

GOONEY

Sup Ram-- ooh damn, the fuck happened to you?

SHARICE

Oh shit, lemme see.

RAMIRA

I got jumped and set up!

SHARICE

Set up?

RAMIRA

Sheisty ass. She's not to be trusted.

GOONEY

For real? The one who said she'd get your tape on air?

RAMIRA

Yea, she lied and said she was gon' give it to the radio, but instead she fucks with the Cano Crew on the low and she gave it to them to let Lady El hear.

(beat)

SHARICE

Damn, that's some shit though.

RAMIRA

Yea. Neva trust a person who calls them self Sheisty.

cut to:

INT. RAMIRA'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

She grabs her stuff and gets ready for the battle. She's tense. Not saying much. She has a band aid on her cheek.

RAMIRA

Mom, I'ma be out tonight.

CARMEN

Where you goin'?

RAMIRA

Sharice's.

Mom smokes a cigarette.

CARMEN

What happened to you?

RAMIRA

Nothin'.

CARMEN

Baby, what happened?

RAMIRA

Mom! Nothin', don't worry 'bout it ok?

CARMEN takes a big hit of cigarette. RAMIRA leaves.

RAMIRA

(attitude)

I'll be back.

cut to:

INT. city bus - night

Dark. No one really on the bus. RAMIRA is tense, doesn't say anything or blink. Fists balled up tight. Feet shaking. She stares and focused.

EXT. DOMINION - NIGHT

Battle night. The bus arrives in the South Bronx. RAMIRA gets off. She stares at the sign. Red letters blinking. DOMINION. Some people shoulder bump her and people are rushing in. She enters.

She goes to the bathroom before the show. Green. Hazy. She looks sick, sweating. SHARICE enters. RAMIRA walks out.

SHARICE

You ready?

RAMIRA

I think.

SHARICE

You think?

RAMIRA

I'm ready.

(beat)

RAMIRA and SHARICE are face to face tense. SHARICE grabs RAMIRA's shoulders.

SHARICE

Now I want you to fuckin' murder them tonight, shut this shit down aight? Rap like you ain't rap before.

RAMIRA

Yea.

SHARICE

Ok, let's do it.

They give each other dap.

INT. dominion stage - night

Blarring lights. Grungy. Ghetto. Music blarring loud. Screams of the crowd. DJ scratching some beats.

HOST

Aight aight ya'll! It's goin' down tonight. We got Uniq and Crazy Ace up to battle first.

RAMIRA gets up on stage. Scared, shook. Shots of the crowd booing.

Crowd member

Who the fuck is this bitch?

She spots the CANO CREW on the other side. JORGE, SHEISTY in the crowd, smirking. SHARICE, ANGELO and GOONEY all in the audience watching.

DJ cuts the track and the beat drops. CRAZY ACE goes first. Lame, wack, crowd boo's. RAMIRA aka UNIQ goes up next. Crowd goes nuts, she's sick. CROWD cheers. She's shocked. She advances to the next round.

HOST

Aight, looks like Uniq advances on to Mook in round 2.

2nd Battle, a guy. He's wack, lame horrible. RAMIRA battles and she's killing it.

3rd Battle, LADY EL, CROWD quiets down. Bandage on her ear. RAMIRA has a bandage on her cheek They stare, LADY EL rips it, kills it. RAMIRA battles, sicker. LADY EL pushes RAMIRA. CROWD is speechless. She walks and RAMIRA is stunned. CROWD cheers. Her crew runs on stage, lifts her up. Chants champion.

EXT. DOMINION - NIGHT

Everyone exits. RAMIRA walks out.

SHARICE

Aye, you fuckin' killed that shit girl. Proud a you!

RAMIRA

Thanks.

GOONEY

Yo, you smashed on 'em!

GOONEY hugs RAMIRA.

They hug. RAMIRA walks and caught by ANGELO.

ANGELO

Hey, can we talk?

RAMIRA

Yea.

ANGELO

You fuckin' smashed it tonight!

RAMIRA

Thanks.

(beat)

They walk in a private area.

ANGELO

Um, I was wondering, like we been friends since we were little and I love you more than a friend.

RAMIRA

So do I. I have feelings, ever since we were little, was just too afraid to say anything.

ANGELO

Me too.

ANGELO kisses RAMIRA. They make out in the middle of the street. SHARICE stares and is stunned.

SHARICE

What?! Didn't know ya'll liked each other like that!

SHARICE stands there looking and smiling. GOONEY comes up and kisses SHARICE without noticing.

SHARICE

Hey, what the hell Goon?

ANGELO and RAMIRA laugh. They hold hands, walk off and talk.

ANGELO

I love you.

RAMIRA

I love you too.

fade to:

EXT. park - day

Following line appears over a black screen.

10 years later.

RAMIRA and ANGELO are walking in the park, sitting on a bench, reminiscing on when they were teens.

RAMIRA

Remember back when we were teens and would always go in that abandoned house and be reckless?

ANGELO

Yea, good times and the first time we kissed and it was to Bonita Applebum?

RAMIRA

Yea, I miss that song.

(beat)

They're daughter playing in the park on the playground. They smile and reminisce.

RAMIRA

Come on Reyna.

REYNA comes running. ANGELO picks her up. He kisses her. ANGELO and RAMIRA both kiss.

fade out

Following line appears one line at a time.

RAMIRA and ANGELO are now married with a daughter living in the upper East Side of Manhattan. RAMIRA is a full time radio DJ.

RAMIRA works for a radio station. ANGELO is a full time DJ and also works as an editor for a Hip-Hop magazine.

SHARICE graduated from Columbia University, pursuing her career as an actress, engaged.

GOONEY is pursuing his career as a music producer.

CARMEN quit drugs and went to rehab. She now works as a factory worker. Her and RAMIRA are on good terms.

LADY EL and the CANO CREW split up. LADY EL got 3 years jail time.

CHANELLE FOXX and JAZZY O quit the gang lifestyle, and pursuing careers as secretaries.

fade out

 

 

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