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TITLE (EDIT)
Eve's Birthday Surprise
DESCRIPTION
A funny little play.
[204 words]
TITLE KEYWORD
Humor
AUTHOR
Amarjit Bhambra
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
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[June 2007]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (144)
A Different Kind Of Love (Poetry) - [95 words] [Nature]
A Dj Song (Songs) - [130 words]
A Few Asian Girls In Britain 1969 (Poetry) Incident that we had to face in School from English girls with hump against the Asian girls. [163 words] [Biography]
A Letter To Shilpa (Poetry) A thought on racism.... [181 words]
A Lost Soul (Poetry) A poem based on what drinking can do. [79 words] [Mind]
A Message For Christmas....... (Poetry) A Little song that l always remember from my childhood which l learned in Sunday School, I think that there should be more Sunday School for our children to be preaching on the right path - so that th... [80 words]
A Mother In Law From India (Plays) This poem is written with an open mind and does not relate to my own Mother in Law in anyway.It is something that is made up and l hope you enjoy it, as It is my first peice using both English and In... [225 words] [Humor]
A Peice Of Spain (Poetry) I have not been back to Spain since 27 years! [65 words]
A Taste Of Snow (Poetry) A contrast between two lands Africa and Britain. [212 words]
A Thing Of A Bat? (Short Stories) When this actually happened, it was very hilarious. I hope you imagine it well to enjoy that particular day with us. [349 words] [Humor]
Aaron (Poetry) A small Hiku poem - My first Grandson [17 words] [Relationships]
An Unbalanced World (Poetry) - [168 words]
Angry Waves (Poetry) The waves of 2005 [97 words] [Nature]
Another Bilingual Indian Song (Songs) Having bought up in England, Its nice to try and write songs or peotry in Indian, tranlated in English So other people can understand us too. And as u can see in the Music stream, youngesters of Brit... [171 words]
Be Kind (Poetry) - [61 words]
Birth (Poetry) And it was the birth of my Grand son! [33 words] [Biography]
Brown Owl (Poetry) Was an Middle aged Lady living down our street, who ran the Local Girl Guide. She encouraged me to go to Brownies with her each week at the age of 7. I am an Asian girl and she welcomed our family wi... [152 words] [Biography]
By The Sea (Poetry) Its were we all like to be. [82 words]
Charlie The Squirral (Short Stories) When my son was born,I alway remember a Squirral in the Hospital grounds that the Nurses used to feed -chips, so this story is for children to enjoy dedicated to Charlie the Squirral.(Oh my son is ov... [341 words]
Circle Of Life (Poetry) Haiku About life... [10 words] [Mystery]
Corridors Of Love? (Poetry) Knocking on the right door....I remember my creator.... [79 words] [Mystical]
Cries Eoch In The Mountains, (Poetry) Can you not almost hear the real eoch of crying in the cold Mountains after the Earthquake? [75 words] [Nature]
Dare If You Care (Poetry) - [67 words] [Relationships]
Dear Brother (Poetry) Life is full of meanings, but sometimes we wished we had said things not realizing it when it is too late. [101 words] [Relationships]
Deep Rooted Love (Poetry) - [75 words] [Mystery]
Diana (Poetry) A POEM ABOUT Diana. [55 words]
Do Yea Remember Those Eyebrows Gil? (Poetry) Some of the funny things that happen to us in life.... [131 words]
Don't Judge Me Via A Book By It's Cover (Poetry) I say don't judge anyone even a ........ [207 words] [Humor]
Eat You Lunch Children (Short Stories) A story for Halloween for young children,especially the ones that don't finish their lunch.... [450 words] [Literary Fiction]
Emotion Hurts (Poetry) - [102 words] [Mystical]
Emotions Hurt (Songs) It made me cry as I wrote this sad song, of the day my mother died - did it make anybody else cry? - I think that death is a mystery. [104 words] [Mystery]
Estimated Love (Poetry) Love has its values in measures, amounts and cost... [74 words]
Face To Face With Daylight Robbers (Short Stories) A tricky situation... [288 words]
From The Earth To The Moon (Poetry) - [75 words]
Full Steam Ahead (Poetry) A Child's first Train..... [31 words]
Funny Funny (Poetry) Have a laugh, its good for you. cheers [469 words] [Comedy]
God Is Working On Another Mircle (Poetry) Please continue praying for Payam for today l have read that after 5 weeks he has started to talk! He is a 15 year old boy who was Knocked down by a car,,, Please keep praying [44 words]
He Gave It All Away (Short Stories) I have my own African Grey and this story was written in 1999, hope you like it.... [1,959 words]
Help Me Back To The Ground (Songs) Imagine singing this one on top of a mountain. [111 words] [Self-Help]
Henna And The Coloured Pencils (Children) Delightful short story about a small girl who threw her coloured pencils away but.... [586 words] [Fantasy]
Hidden Looks (Poetry) Mysteries of Love. [158 words]
Hip Hop, Bangra's Hot (Songs) Comments on this one which includes HIP HOP, Bangra and Boy, girl (SCENE IN DISCO CLUB) and...... a Parrot! RAPPING IT IN! pretty smart.... what do you think? [251 words]
How A Teenager Advoided A Pervert (Short Stories) A lot of teenager girls are not aware of dangers that they would face when confronted with a pervert.... thinking clever sometimes work. [819 words] [Literary Fiction]
I Remember Joe (Poetry) About our cockatoo whom we had for 11 years. [147 words]
If I Was To Walk Back In Time (Poetry) - [63 words]
Impecunious (Poetry) A poem about work without money! [128 words]
In Out (Poetry) Figure it out A Hiku - meaning a small four line verse poem. [24 words]
Is What L Hate, Is What L ................. (Poetry) Do you know the feeling? [356 words]
It Was One Day Before Christmas....... (Poetry) - [88 words]
Its Rock (Songs) - [87 words]
Just Like Your Dad (Poetry) - [61 words]
Knocky Knocky Nnocks! (Children) When the world cries, you cry with it, and when the world laugh, you laugh with it. [92 words] [Humor]
Life Can Take You Up And Down (Poetry) - [103 words]
Like A Bottle (Songs) Something knew to me - A Bilingal song, written and translated - in English and Indian. So it's a 2 way writting method. ....A bit on the unfinished side perhap you can help finish it? [64 words]
Like Sugar And Cream (Songs) A little love song. [96 words] [Fantasy]
Like Troubled Water (Short Stories) One way of explaining life... [1,261 words]
Lilic Dreams (Poetry) I aways loved the colour Lilic - lilics are full of dreams. [99 words] [Fantasy]
Living In Dreams (Poetry) How far can l remember, for our lives gone by are dreams now, that we can never forget and never thought we would dream off, Yet we live our dreams and yet we never deamt we would come this far.(A lo... [95 words] [Biography]
Love Is A Connection (Poetry) Haiku On Love... [12 words]
Love On The Other Side (Songs) A song about a woman who died young and her husband is kind of forgotton her and married someone else. [161 words] [Fantasy]
Love With Respect (Poetry) - [76 words] [Mind]
Making A Promise (Poetry) How do you keep a Promise? [75 words]
Me And My Pyjamas (Songs) How doe it feel song have a laugh and have an opinion? I don't mind if you think it is silly.... [162 words] [Comedy]
Mental Art (Poetry) Picture painted via da Mood. [100 words]
Modonna Crying Statue - Why? (Foreign) Words that express poetry and words that express meaning of the above. [146 words] [Mystical]
Mother Earth's Brains For The Future (Poetry) See for yourselves, What is happening around the world - (Globle Warming) Richard Braston is also now offering award to solve the problem to scientist. PS This poem was written in 2005. [154 words] [Nature]
Mother India Our Root Man (Songs) I Love reading on how other Silks like myself have settled in England and other parts of the World BUT at the end of the day, one should not forget our Roots - We all were at one time the seeds of Mot... [168 words]
Mr. Me,Me,Do (Songs) A little jolly son, for babys and toddlors. [69 words]
Mrs. Bilkhu And Her Two Little Finches (Short Stories) A very sad little story - very diffcult to write through my tears. They flew into her heart and ....... [926 words]
Mrsa - The Deadly Bug (Poetry) - [215 words]
My Africa (Poetry) Bits and peices of what l can remember in Africa from the age of about 5 to 6 [71 words] [Biography]
My Bodyguard, Carol (Poetry) A school friend that used to protect an Asian Girl in Multy racial British School in the 70's. [128 words] [Biography]
My Favourate Flower.....An Orchid. (Poetry) They are beautiful and smell nice,,,,, [48 words]
My New Gran-Ma And My New Gran-Dad (Poetry) When we arrived in Britain in the cold winters of the 60's, At the age of 6, how did we know that we were going to leave behind our Grand-dad and our Lovely Gran-ma back in Africa. After living rough ... [259 words] [Biography]
My Own Thought On The New Airport T5 (Poetry) My own thoughts about the New Runaway, Terminal 5 [133 words]
My Teeth Are Clean! (Children) One way to teach children to eat carrots! This one is for under 5's I hope you enjoy it, it was written for my Gran-son Aaron. [65 words] [Animal]
My Treat (Short Stories) - [631 words]
My Well Respected Brother On Lakri Day (Poetry) Lakri Day,is a very special day for Brother and Sister. The Sister's tie a string on their brother wrist to show their love and respect for each other. My brother died a few years ago, so l wrote thi... [73 words] [Biography]
My Wonderful Gran-Son Arron (Poetry) My first Gran-son....Ahhh. [23 words] [Relationships]
Now That You Have Gone.... (Poetry) - [119 words]
One Day And Than What? (Poetry) Think about it. [123 words] [Nature]
One Foot Here, One Foot There (Poetry) Haiku about the soul [10 words]
Our First Pet (Poetry) About a cocktel which we had for 11 years and one of our first pet. [128 words]
Our Parrot Scared The Burglar (Short Stories) I can imagine at it happened and find it quite funny as to how he must have ran off without taking any goods from our house.... [454 words] [Animal]
Pardise In Neasden (Poetry) - [75 words]
Pleasant Dreams (Poetry) A small poem about my brother who passed away a few years ago. [45 words] [Mind]
Pray To Be Connected (Poetry) Feel the Power of Beinging connected. [103 words]
Prayers (Poetry) Prayers can... [40 words]
Praying For A Mircle.... (Poetry) Please have heart and join in pray for a mircle for a very sick boy who was involved in an accident in October. If our prays work, maybe we will hear of that Mircle. This is one way of doing good and ... [96 words] [Mind]
Put It Together (Songs) - [94 words]
Revealing Secrets (Songs) How difficult could it be to get into ones heart. to know ones feelings..... [111 words] [Horror]
Shine Your Light (Poetry) - [62 words]
Sindy's Eyebrows (Screenplays) When this happened, it was very hillious and funny. I hope you enjoy it too. [213 words] [Humor]
Singapore Excution Of Mr. Nguyen (Poetry) Since last week, l came across the excution news on the Australian Mr. Nguyen. l am shocked at the way this young mans life is going to end because of a mistake he made. We all make mistakes, we all g... [149 words] [Humor]
Sisterly Love? (Poetry) Some of the things that happen in our teens... [106 words]
Thank You Britain (Poetry) This poem is about from there to here, when we first left Africa and landed in Britain. [118 words] [Adventure]
Thanks A Lot (Songs) Bangra is well know Indian beat now often used in Even rap songs, I make this one up last night. I hope some one would comment on it. [101 words] [Fantasy]
The Beautiful Sky Blue Budgie (Poetry) Saw him stand out again the green surroundings. [194 words] [Animal]
The Burglar, My Husband And I (Non-Fiction) This actually happened, Its also good to have a laugh about it. [243 words] [Humor]
The Ceramic Dog (Poetry) Which was so important to my mother before she died. [61 words]
The Day Joe Died (Poetry) When our family lost our feathered friend whom we had for 11 years [91 words]
The Destroyer Of Love (Poetry) What destroys Love.... [57 words]
The Different Colours Of Love (Poetry) Love moods comes in different packages [130 words]
The First Cry (Poetry) And l wonder why [45 words]
The Flower Of Life (Poetry) - [34 words]
The Good Against The Evil (Short Stories) - [628 words]
The Healing Hand Of The Lord (Short Stories) I was in a Foreign Country, with my son who fell ill in the middle of the night. I have to share my love from God and his wonderful healing power which comes from faith and love.... [259 words] [Mystical]
The Love Of God Within You (Poetry) - [80 words] [Mind]
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The Pharoah's Daughter (Short Stories) A little tale one mightlike.... [246 words]
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Eve's Birthday Surprise
Amarjit Bhambra

Tracy and tom were watching television in their sitting.
 The door bell rings. It was Eve.
Eve started disturbing Tom by poking him in the back.

Eve: you forgot it�s my birthday today

Tom started laughing.

Eve: walking up to Tracy.

Eve: Where�s my birthday presents.

Tom: We�ll get you one later.

After joking around Eve left.

It was almost 9 O�clock and the shop was shut.

Tracy: Oh well, I have to buy her one tomorrow.

As they sat watching the television a massive daddy long leg caught their eye.

Tom: quick get me a match box.

He had an idea. He got hold of a cup and caught the Daddy long leg.

Tom: Have you got the match box?

Tracy handed it to him.

Tom: Lets� go and give Eve her birthday present now shall we.

Tracy: I�ve got some wrapping paper.

The pair of them put the daddy long leg in the large match box and wrapped it.

They were ready to give Eve a surprise.

Tracy: l will hide beside some cars while you go and knock on her door.

Eve opened the door.

Eve; OH what a lovely surprise

As she carefully opened the box, the Daddy long leg walked up her hand and up her arm. And eve screamed in the night, telling everybody that it was her birthday.

 

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