Immortalized Dream by Fred Hardy Suasidal theme. something I wrote a long time ago the words came very easy. and like most th... [172 words]
One More Try by Fred Hardy Complicated lyrics fast pace music with great melody .still searching for answers. [230 words]
How Is It Now! by Fred Hardy hard to follow its like a really bad trip chorus is simple with repetition any comments good or... [248 words]
My Angel ,My Star by Fred Hardy Speaks of the pain of living without someone who was very close. [161 words]
The Sinfull Seduction Of A Communist by Fred Hardy a point of view from the left on how american society has influenced the... [276 words]
True To Your Name by Fred Hardy Sometimes it can be very confusing with all the complications that surround us choice are mad... [205 words]
When Your Seventeen by Fred Hardy Misunderstood. very twisted look at the choice between life and death. in a world that has ... [359 words]
You Had Lost Your Way by Fred Hardy Very slow with more tempo in the chorus a definite religious theme [193 words]
Wating For A Message From God by Fred Hardy Not a religious song. no more of revenge mode on a really bad break up. [240 words]
You Think That You Know Me by Fred Hardy Slow pace,a view from the left. [231 words]
Yesterday's Past by Fred Hardy Not much flow but does speak out with imagination some religious people may be offended. [234 words]
Here And Gone by Fred Hardy Depression with susidal theme a definite rock song with more tempo in the chorus. [321 words]
You Want It All by Fred Hardy About the girl next door a very fast pace rock/alternative type song. [240 words]
September Rain by Fred Hardy One of those boring non imaginitve boy girl songs that have been done to death . [233 words]
Somewhere(Part One) by Fred Hardy Part one of three. [203 words]
Another Night In Paradise by Fred Hardy Simple three cord progression the chorus sounds familiar plain rock no surprises lyri... [318 words]
Consumed by Fred Hardy It's about a girl who was just trying to be herself and trying to fit in to the world around her and t... [263 words]
Arizona Heat by Fred Hardy A pop rock song with simple but catchy lyrics .any comments would be appreciated. [237 words]
I Packed My Bags by Desi Williams About how my parents don't appreciate me for who I am, and how sometimes, it gets to the point... [252 words]
Like Raven Wings' by Brian C Lebron - [134 words]
The Internal Plea by Amy Anderson Umm... about the people who bottle up their emotions and appear to be happy but on the inside... [285 words]
Dark Fate by Amy Anderson I was heaps upset when I wrote it and yer... Tell me what you think. [222 words]
6 Foot Under by Amy Anderson A song I rote the otha night, half asleep and heeps upset.. tell me what you think. [294 words]
.The Beach.
---Hasnt Got One by Kasey Ann Miller I havent got a name yet,some sugestions please.. [122 words]
Your Secret Sins by Amy Anderson A song I wrote about... well I guess it might be obvious.. tell me what you think. [310 words]
Your Lullaby by Amy Anderson Another song, tell me what you think :) [221 words]
Why? Why? How? To See His Own Death by Josh Earl This is a song about a kid that gets bullied so much through his life he ca... [245 words]
Where Are We Now? by Desi Williams Sort of a poem song... wait. all songs are poems LOL... about how trapped I feel sometimes. ... [193 words]
What's Dead Is Gone by Amy Anderson Another song about a friend... actually it's the same person... so as you've probably gathe... [144 words]
What Will Become Of Me by Melanie West A slow but touching drama song. [113 words]
Too Many by Amy Anderson I wrote this a while ago and I wasnt guna put it on but oh well... Its about what I used to always wis... [184 words]
To Set You Free From A Life With Me by Josh Earl This is a song about a guy that nows his girl friends life would be better ... [214 words]
The Way It Goes by Andrej Milec Dedicated to all those who love and have been loved. If you feel the last stanza is a bit diffe... [84 words]
The Unnamed by Kasey Ann Miller Sorry ppls,the stupid thing screwed up my name etc,my real name is KASEY miller not KAREN miller...... [121 words]
The Phsyco Stream by Josh Earl Its a very heavy song about ppl not takin shit of no one anymore. [124 words]
The Ones Unnamed by Karen Miller This song is kinda about me I guess,but also relates to other people,guy or girl,that feel lik... [128 words]
The Hand You Have Sold by Josh Earl This is a kinda stupid song its about no one I have meet yet but I am shore I will sum d... [114 words]
The Description Of Beauty You by Josh Earl This is a song about a special person that has left alot of things in my mermorie... [132 words]
Talk To Me by Sam Cheton It's a song I wrote for no particular reason kinda relates to me... [166 words]
Suicide Lullaby by Kasey Ann Miller This is about a guy I love.... [133 words]
Sonic Boom by Josh Earl This is about a person that never gives up to be with you even when you dont want them to...this is ... [173 words]
Song Of My Life by Andrej Milec Just how it all feels sometimes. [109 words]
Should I Let You In by Carla Thomson A slow rock song. [123 words]
Sacred by Alina Grigoryan - [163 words]
Rising Suns Of You by Josh Earl A softer song about a gurl want more clik in and read and tell me wat u think. [174 words]
Revelations by Joel Aaron An invitation to discover who I am ,the part of me you cannot see. [151 words]
Put Me Down by Alina Grigoryan This song is not about me at all,though I wrote it. [140 words]
Over Change by Amy Anderson Wrote it bout one of my friends... just thought of it off the top of mi head so I duno if its any g... [134 words]
Only One by Brian C Lebron - [60 words]
Old Man 2 by Andrej Milec This one is more like a pop/rock song. Thought it up on my way home. [166 words]
Nothing Less Then You by Amy Anderson Just came to me then... tell me what you think. [142 words]
Not Loving You by Amy Anderson Umm... about some one who is in love with one person but can't stop thinking about some one else... [158 words]
Never Lands Pain by Josh Earl This is a song about a kind of a nerd liking a realli popular chik and she never notices him i... [228 words]
Natasha by Alina Grigoryan Just a funny one , nothing personal to Natashas:)) [66 words]
Melody Of My Tears by Josh Earl This is a song about a gurl I new who was very depressed at the time..... plz leave your com... [123 words]
Maybe I'll Let Go by Nash Song about the same girl it's always about:- [218 words]
Looking At The Same Thing...Different! .. 6 Songs.. by Jane Ruth The song is about all of the different perspectives we have... [763 words]
Little Black Hook by Nash - [254 words]
Liberty For Libertines by Alina Grigoryan A note *on 18th of may 1964 was a riot ( rockers etc.) [179 words]
Know Me by Sam Cheton It's a song I wrote about how I feel about this guy I've liked 4ever. [122 words]
Know Me (Revised) by Sam Cheton It's Knew Me revised. I didnt like the other one as much. This one has rap in it... [115 words]
Kewler Than You Or Me To Handle by Josh Earl About alota faggets that think there to good for anyone. [252 words]
Just A Little, Baby by Desi Williams How I'm feeling in the moment... [143 words]
I'm Still Alive by Amy Anderson Another song... same shit behind it... tell me what you think. [269 words]
If You Wanna by Tom Bomb - [117 words]
How Do I Live by Kym Whitney Um this is a song already made up by trisha yearwood....its like exactly how I feel for someone r... [188 words]
Hope For The Helpless by Amy Anderson About the people that make life so hard and the ones who give me strength to keep going..... [255 words]
Happy by Steph Kidd Its a rock song. me and my parents have been having some crazy times lately. theyre driving me insane...l... [124 words]
Give Into The New Addiction by Karen Miller --This is a song about a guy who im not to happy with at the moment. [117 words]
Friday Afternoon by Carla Thomson This song is kinda jazzy. if you just read it can sound depressing. but it sounds kool when it... [99 words]
Feel Sorry by Jannah Akira Bout me and how I feel. [208 words]
Don't You Realize by Finding Saturday Fs It's a song someone in my band wrote about a guy in our class. [101 words]
Difunctional Things by Luke Giddins About people I dont like and what I want them to do. [397 words]
Depression--- Game Over by Josh Earl This song is about anyone that has been depressed a song about the real life the happy ... [201 words]
Comfort Place by China Rose Marie Bullock Talks about the place you go to when you need your space. [130 words]
Clones At Heart by Josh Earl A very soft song think of vermillion pt 2 [136 words]
Broken Cinderella by Melanie Geeregat Umm..don't really know what to say about this, wrote it about myself I guess... [174 words]
Blood Stained Tears by Amy Anderson Another song... leave a comment :) [225 words]
Best Friend And Worst Enemy by Desi Williams Hard Rock lyrics... country sound... those two don't normally go together, huh? :) ... [154 words]
Be My Guest by Alina Grigoryan Song about me..i really felt like that in the moment I wrote this song Not a long one but with mus... [35 words]
Awake--Sleep by Josh Earl This is a weird song about people that never want to sleep never wanna see what there nightmares b... [174 words]
Single Chaotic by Amy Anderson I was so sick of always getting the blame for anything and everything that ever went wrong.... a... [186 words]
Without You In This Lonely World by Jennifer Cuartas A song about a guy I used to love who died. [66 words]
With A Reason Why by Aryka - [279 words]
Who Am I That Jesus Would Die For Me? by Jessica L Young This song talks about wondering why Jesus would die for me. We are all si... [102 words]
What Is Here by Jannah Akira Never look back. [130 words]
Upside Down by Katie C Johnson It's about a real life story that I had for a boy that I loved but things came between us and ended... [573 words]
Trapt by Amy Anderson This song is pretty up beat all the way through and is especially faster in the chorus. It's about feelin... [164 words]
There's No Sometimes With You by Ellen E Watson Sometimes clouds turn into storms Sometimes sunshine shines on my day Sometimes s... [115 words]
The One Who Aparts Us by Fahad Tauhid Lyrics about life: The most hated the most loved. Its quite metallic. [119 words]
Thank You Lord by Jessica L Young Song talks about thanking the Lord for everything...Med. paced... [77 words]
Suicidal Self Desire by Josh Anderson Lyrics; Through misery and self sacrifice, what is this world achieving? When sung, it is ... [176 words]
Steak Night At Barnie's by Lithium - [116 words]
Stay Away From My Way by Desi Williams It's a hard rock song... maybe not heavy metal... but definitely hard rock... punk... yea... [134 words]
So Sick by Nash Song about my repetetive confusion with the same girl. [163 words]
She'll Make It Thru by Dri - [278 words]
Saviour by Kaye Burland This is a song about a teenaged girl who feels empty and alone. [178 words]
Red Eye Summer by Nash A little discription of my summertime. leave a review! [188 words]
Not You by Kelli L Potts This poem is about a kid being constanly pressured to be something they don't want to be. A very common... [102 words]
My Melted October by Kayla Hupp This song is basically a romance song. It tells about when my boyfriend whom I loved with all... [164 words]
Mahal Kita by Amy Anderson Well.. mahal kita is filo for "i love you" and I wrote about my boyfriend who I have liked for along... [124 words]
Lost In Mind by Amy Anderson Just another song... hope you like it. [211 words]
Left To Burn by Amy Anderson Another song... so f*n cut wen I rote it.. plz read it n tell me wat u think :) [296 words]
Jesus You Are by Jessica L Young My last song that I wrote. I am working on writing more...This song is fast paced... [112 words]
Jesus Is There by Jessica L Young Song tells you that Jesus will never leave you nor forsake you. He'll always be there when you n... [105 words]
Imperfect by Nash Lol I decided to do more of a wierd theme this time instead of a straight out song. I like it, I migh... [183 words]
If Only You Could by Nash Song about alot of things. I took some of the comments on my other songs and peoms into cons... [167 words]
I Love You Jesus by Jessica L Young A little chorus I made up...Fast paced... [39 words]
Four Walls by Brian C Lebron - [93 words]
Enter Insanity by Amy Anderson I wrote this song after I had been sitting down for a while thinking about my life, I realised t... [218 words]
Ends Here by Amy Anderson Another fast, heavy song... feel free to say anything you want about it... good or bad, it's all good... [232 words]
Christmas Day by Fred Hardy Simple melody catchy,not every thing is as it seems. [211 words]
Bullets by Lode Loyens Song about the real violence and hardship for someone born in the inner city or ghetto. [133 words]
Broken Promises(Monday Never Came) by Babe I got hurt too many times and let it happen again, I had to get it out some ... [189 words]
Bleeding Tears by Amy Anderson Another song.... alot of emotion behind it. [163 words]
All I Need 2 by Desi Williams This is a slightly different version of the first one... no swear words. [166 words]
Ache by Amy Anderson I'm not sure I really like this song.... I was so cut when I wrote it so I don't think I put much effort i... [165 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
.The Beach. |
DESCRIPTION
A countryish song.
[125 words] |
AUTHOR
Carla Thomson |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
hello everyone, i hope that you like my work.. i'm a 19 year old girl who uses writing as an outlet.. some of my work isn't the best but there's a few pieces out there worth reading.. i started writing these posts when i was 14.. and i haven't taken the time to weed out really anything that's a little dull.. well anyways.. hope you enjoy what you do read
*Smiles* always,
~Carla
[January 2009] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
[email protected] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (105)
A Card For My Love (Poetry) Ok... this isn't a card I sent to anyone... and no one sent this to me... i wrote this for my art class and I thought it was good enough to post,,, so what do you think? [92 words]
A Fleck Of Sand (Poetry) - [115 words]
A Letter To You (Poetry) It's a letter to the only guy I've ever loved. it's letting him know how I feel, an opology, and letting him know that I've changed.... well read the thing... what do get out of it?... i never did sen... [232 words]
A Place In My Memories (Poetry) - [84 words]
Alarm Clock (Poetry) - [91 words]
Another Long Summer (Poetry) What can I say summer can be boring when all your friends are out of town. [232 words] [Teenage]
Can't Get Away (Poetry) - [78 words]
Class After Lunch (Poetry) - [134 words]
Confused (Poetry) - [19 words]
Congratulations (Poetry) I wrote this for an art project at school... we have to make 3-4 card and this was one of them.. hope you like it... and I hope my teacher does too...lol. [55 words]
Crying At Night (Poetry) - [62 words]
Cute Little Kids (Poetry) - [63 words]
Dad (Poetry) This poem is about my dad, and how he let my step-mom take over. My brother and I moved out after having to dealing with 4 1/2 years of her of her bullshit. And I pray to god that she doesn't treat Ta... [126 words]
Dear Friend (Songs) - [167 words]
Do I? (Poetry) - [102 words]
Do You Really Like Me? (Poetry) - [114 words]
Drama (Poetry) - [68 words]
Drea (Poetry) - [209 words]
Dumped For The First Time (Poetry) - [134 words]
Empty Room (Songs) - [116 words]
Everyone's Crap (Poetry) - [249 words]
Expanding My Horizon (Poetry) - [164 words]
First Time In 3 Months (Poetry) It's about the day I saw my friend val again. [128 words]
Flash-Backs (Songs) This is a country song that I wrote on the date of: 10-24-04. [165 words]
Fly Like A Sparrow (Poetry) - [64 words]
Friday Afternoon (Songs) This song is kinda jazzy. if you just read it can sound depressing. but it sounds kool when its being sung. [99 words]
Get Out Of My Head (Poetry) - [205 words]
Getting Back On Track (Poetry) - [98 words]
God Please Help Me (Poetry) - [51 words]
Hidden Beauty (Poetry) - [121 words]
Hope You're Lucky (Poetry) - [77 words]
How Do I Say It? (Poetry) - [133 words]
I Feel So Used (Poetry) - [116 words]
If You Were Here (Poetry) - [56 words]
I'll Try For You (Poetry) - [117 words]
I'm A Bitch! (Poetry) ok... this is about me, how i lost my verginaty to my friend's guy, and how i feel about that... [297 words]
It's My Birthday! (Poetry) I just wrote it... tell me what you think... I think it get's a little of the subject... all well... hope you enjoy it [198 words]
It's Not All About Sex (Non-Fiction) You'll find out. [383 words]
It's Only A Dream (Poetry) - [77 words]
Just Hold Me (Songs) - [156 words]
Just Respect Me (Poetry) Guys annoy me when they don't know how to show respect... what else can I say... they piss me off. [99 words]
Kid Without A Clue (Poetry) - [55 words]
Lets Clean The Slate (Poetry) Something I just wrote.. I see more than one meaning in it.. well it's here for everyone to enjoy... would love some feed back... keep on smiling... because smiles sure make my day! [91 words]
Life Wasted Sitting (Poetry) - [99 words]
Looking Back At You (Poetry) This is about a person that I spent a lot of time with last summer. i don't think that the title really fits this poem.. but it's gunna have to do until I think of somethink else. [141 words]
Matthew (Poetry) Well you know who you are.. lol i just read your poem... I thought you'd like a poem more than a review... you write for me so just thought I could write a little something for you... it's a I had tro... [122 words]
Maybe More Than A Friend (Poetry) - [60 words]
Midnight Rain (Poetry) I wrote it last night and would love some feedback... anything would good. [148 words]
Missing You Still (Poetry) The only guy i've ever loved... thinking about him still... I left him about a year ago... [129 words]
My Parents And Myself (Non-Fiction) It's basicly me bitching about my parents. [1,277 words] [Teenage]
My Second Chance (Poetry) - [115 words]
My Writing Lately (Poetry) It sucks [145 words]
Nature Of The Seasons (Poetry) - [62 words] [Nature]
No More Creeps For Me (Poetry) - [78 words]
One Of My Prayers (Poetry) I just started to write what I was feeling and as I wrote I was prying... I guess I just don't know what I want really... I just pray that God will take the hurt away. [301 words]
Only Curious (Poetry) - [122 words]
Picture (Poetry) - [101 words]
Please Smile For Me (Poetry) - [87 words]
Praising Him (Poetry) - [100 words]
Quinton (Poetry) - [194 words] [Relationships]
Rejection (Poetry) - [107 words]
Restless Slumber (Poetry) - [74 words]
Scorpio (Poetry) - [116 words]
Shocked (Poetry) - [74 words]
Should I Let You In (Songs) A slow rock song. [123 words]
Sitting Alone (Songs) A country song. well its just something I came up with thinking of other peoples' lives. it has nothing to do with me, but there are people out there that have to deal with what I wrote. [146 words]
Someone (Poetry) Someone that I knew back in middle school... I just want to get to know him better... he'd a good friend... now all you readers don't get the wrong idea... ok if you want to you can... but that is not... [100 words]
Still Waiting (Poetry) - [95 words]
Stop Looking To The Skies (Poetry) - [45 words]
Stress (Poetry) - [302 words]
The Age Of The Less Forgotten (Poetry) I don�t really understand it, even though I wrote it. these words just came to me; so I wrote them down. maybe someone can tell me what it really means� because I�m really at a loss here. [83 words]
The Break Up (Poetry) - [126 words]
The Girl In The Corner (Poetry) - [89 words]
The Joy Of A Teen's Room (Poetry) Well... my room is one of those kool attic rooms... when i'm done painting it it's going to be spiffy cool with tuns of different colors.... well I don't usually keep my room a mess but i've been bizz... [158 words]
The Outside (Poetry) - [100 words]
The Things We Go Through (Poetry) The person that this is talking about is me... when it says "you" it's talking about me. [171 words]
The Way That I See It (Poetry) - [120 words]
They Said They Wouldn't (Poetry) - [79 words]
Thinking Of My Past (Poetry) - [81 words]
Thinking Of Yashua (Poetry) What do yhou think?... it's just somthing that kind of came to me... didn't spend a whole lot of time on it... i'd like some feedback. [159 words]
This Weekend (Poetry) - [242 words]
Thoughts On Life (Poetry) Thoughts and questions about life... stuff I was thinking about [189 words]
Time To Smile (Poetry) - [71 words]
Tk (Poetry) - [204 words]
Turn Down The Sound (Poetry) - [62 words]
Val (Poetry) - [85 words]
Walked Around Town (Songs) - [115 words]
Wanting Something (Poetry) Just something I wrote... I don't know. [113 words]
What Do I Want? (Poetry) - [137 words]
When It Knocks (Poetry) - [90 words]
Where Is It? (Poetry) - [53 words]
Where My Thoughts Lay (Poetry) this is about my ex-fianc� and myself ... a little bit of what i'm feeling right now i couldn't really think of a title that suits this poem [139 words]
Why Am I Single? (Poetry) - [116 words]
Winter's Trees (Poetry) - [20 words]
Wish To Be A Child (Poetry) - [185 words]
Writer's Block (Poetry) - [71 words]
Yet Another Ending (Poetry) more like a letter than a poem... an ending of a sexual friendship with an ex... an ex that's hard to let go of, yet seems to know how to break a girls heart time and time again.. so it's my turn to d... [206 words]
You Are There (Songs) Well it's a song I just wrote... I might add one more verse... [49 words]
You Her And Me (Poetry) - [183 words]
You Love Her (Poetry) - [120 words]
You Need A Beating! (Poetry) - [142 words]
.Always There. (Songs) This is a song that I wrote last summer... I'm just now getting to put it on this site... lol... I hope you enjoy it! [151 words]
.Just Let Me Be. (Poetry) - [221 words] [Teenage]
.Moving On. (Poetry) - [100 words]
.Why Do You Hide Me?. (Poetry) - [102 words]
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.The Beach.
Carla Thomson
Sand on a beach
Water on my feet
The wind in my face
Oh, yeah
I walked around the bend
You�re sittin� on a bench
That�s when our eyes first met
Now, sand on the beach
Water on our feet
The wind�s in our faces
We walked and we talked
We couldn�t stop a laughin�,
That�s when he held my hand
(Softer and slower)
The sand at the beach
His feet in the water
His hair flyin� in the wind
Sand at the beach
Water on our feet
The wind�s in our faces
We talked and we talked
We couldn�t stop a laughin�,
That day he tried to kiss me
But I told him no
He really does respect me
He really makes me happy
That day at the beach
And our water-logged feet
(Softer and slower)
Sand at the beach
Our feet in the water
Our hair flyin� in the wind
A day at the beach
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"the words had good flow with a good use of a rhyme.only you really know what the sound is 'anyways a great effort. better then most i've read on this site " -- fred hardy, hamilton, ontario, canada.
"i'd have to agree with fred.. i liked it. had a good sense of flow to it, there's only a few country songs that really grab my attention, i'd like to hear this n see if it does lol, off paper it looks like it might:):) well done.." -- baker.
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© 2005 Carla Thomson |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
April 2005 |
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