DESCRIPTION
This is the first three chapters of a story I am trying to write, a sort of bonkbuster-cum-comedy about a gilr who seduces her English teacher.
Note: As I am British, my spelling, grammar and dress sizes may vary from yours if you're not british. Just thought you should know. [12,851 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am 21 years old and have just graduated from Glasgow Caledonian University with an honours degree in Marketing and Communication. What I really want to do though is write, that has been my lifelong dream. I am the kind of person who could happily spend my entire life sitting at a computer, writing story after story - of course, that doesn't mean they'll be any good, but practice makes perfect. . .supposedly. I would appreciate any feedback and criticism regarding this story, its not as if I'm going to see any of you face to face! [July 2001]
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READER'S REVIEWS (4) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I really would appreciate feedback on this, even if you would just read the first chapter if you don't have time to go any further, I would be v. grateful! Thanx a lot! x" -- Paula, Hamilton, Scotland.
"Your writing style and diction seem to fit the romance genre very well, based on the quick read I gave your story. Try submitting to some of those markets. They seem to pay better than anything else and they are always looking for new writers." -- RMM, Ft. Worth, TX, USA.
"This short story is well written. Veronica is an interesting character, longing for true romance. I liked this short very well. " -- Robert K. Tarquinio, Santa Monica, California, USA.
"Beautifully done as always Paula, but I think if I were to wake up to a Teletubbies alarm clock, seeing La La and Tinky Winky staring back at me would probably scare the hell out of me :-0 Anyhow I know have a barbarian (Gorell the Slayer) and possibly a bard (Christy Mack) in my band of travelers, voyaging to put an end to the evil reign of the Tyrant of the realm as well as doing other romantic/heroic fantasy sort of things. If you have no idea what I'm even talking about :-) please refer to my reviews of all your past stories." -- EC Allen.
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