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Ever been bullied? Danny Anderson has, this is the short version of his story. Feedback encouraged/welcomed ps, not a true story, that I no of. [523 words]
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Horror
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ColliarAM
Weak Emotion ColliarAM
Over a year ago the name Danny Anderson reminded the students of Harriers College of a very academic, quiet young man. At the age of 17 the bulling he had been encountering for the last three years at least was starting to get more serious.
I cant say I was one of Danny�s friends, I don�t think anyone could, but I feel that I, Tuesday Peters, should let people know his story.
All through high school one group of students in particular gave Danny a very hard time. But at the beginning of sixth form it all became physical. Jimmy and his friends Sean and Alex were very popular. They were known to slam Danny into walls, knock him over and leave threats in his locker.
Danny never talked to anyone about what was happening, that could�ve been a reason why he snapped.
No one is believed to have seen anything prior to the tragic moment of that dark day.
Alex, the more sensitive of Jimmy�s friends, was walking through the hall after bunking fifth period, as he had just passed the bathrooms he was shocked by the piercing sound of a gunshot. There was nobody else around so he rushed to the door, not knowing what to expect he slowly walked in. The stall door in the centre was slightly ajar, he swallowed hard and pushed it open. Alex threw himself backwards and almost fainted at the sight of Danny�s lifeless body huddled on the floor, a pistol inches away.
Alex ran out of the bathroom, he reached the student office. The office ladies say that the look on Alex�s face was enough to know that something terrible had happened. Screaming as loud as he could �Call 111!, Call 111!�, Alex didn�t worry about making a scene.
The police arrived ten minutes later, closing off the area they inspected the bathrooms. There was a huge crowd outside totally confused. Jimmy Laughed at his own lame joke, everyone else just stared at him. Sean started to freak out, saying stuff like Jimmy had murdered Danny etc etc. This was enough for a lot of the crowd to be convinced. A police officer emerged from the bathroom at the noise of the crowd, when he heard what the situation was he silenced them. He then announced �This was no murder, it was most definitely a suicide�.
A couple of ambulance workers came in to remove the body. As they brought out his covered body, everyone around me started to cry, including myself. Then a very lifeless arm drooped out from beneath the smothering covers, causing an icy chill in the air.
Police officers questioned students over the next week. There was also a search of Danny�s room performed. A dairy was recovered that graphically described all that Danny had been through, turns out there was more to it than what most people knew. Jimmy was expelled without any compassionate consideration. Danny�s diary was published and released for sale, it told the story of a successful student bullied into suicide. He became a role model to the bulling victims and will never be forgotten.
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"Nice - some PROSE on this website at last. But it smacks to me as a reporting of a real life happening. Did this really happen? If not then it kinda smacks of wishful thinking. But I like the pace. More description of your emotional state would be good; Incredibly - writers tip - you can express how you feel internally by describing objects and situations outside of your self. I know, I know, -FUCK ME!-. But that's what I think." -- the rube.
"cool work .enough thought provoking to inspire people.keep it up" -- yudi, noidea, india.
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