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Just A Bit Callous Just A Guy
there�s nothing so fine
as the very first time
too bad the moment can�t be saved
the feeling so intense
it gobbles you up
legs get all wobbly
kind of like standing on one leg on a fence
after all the time and effort
she finally said yes
now you wonder
how will i be
can i make her forget
all the guys that came before me
no, that wasn�t a pun
just the way it came out
though it certainly could be taken for one
hey, give me a break
this isn�t an epic
just some words i put together
time for some fun
making love doesn�t always have to be serious
all intense, mind gets delirious
it can be everybit as exciting
just knocking one off
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"hmmm..." -- mattie.
"should there maybe be one more m to that? " -- JAG.
"hmmmm...how's that? :)" -- mattie.
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