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Get My Mind Off Of You by Joe Desanto (1) "Hey! Firstly, i like the song... and the verses are quite strong. In the chorus, i'm not sure about the "The cells moving into my brain" line - cos it sounds more comical than anything else. Also, the below 2 lines is not required. "These moving pictures in my head keep on going and ill soon be dead" Or if u do want to keep it, then add "I just cant seem to get my mind off of you" in the end to make it sound complete. Otherwise - sounds good =) Good luck!" -- Deepa Seshadri, Mumbai, Maharashtra, India. Fully Alive by Joe Desanto (1) "Again, good job! Few pointers. 1) If this will ever leave us pain - Not sure if this line means what you want it to mean... Just re-check on that. 2) Were all living just to see - I'm assuming its 'We're' and not 'Were' 3) In the chorus, you could change the line - Just to see who will belong in my life - to 'For the one to whom i belong' - this rhymes better. Hope my suggestions help! :) Good luck!" -- Deepa Seshadri. Les Miserables by Rose Marie Eckert (1) "this one's quite cool its very poetic (there's no need to say deep I guess) :)" -- Harsimran Singh Gill , Patiala, Punjab, India. I Know My Words by Spencer A Morin (1) "SPENC THAT WAS AWSOME THAT COULD BE LITTLE KIDS HAVE THERE MOM GO TO THIS WEB SITE AND THEY WILL LEARN THERE A-B-C.AND SPELLING TO." -- LOU. Beautiful Life by Jennifer Joan (2) "Very beautiful song. " -- Carol, CA, USA. "This is really beautiful. You should write more" -- Emily Stonehouse, Essex, England. Live Your Life Out Loud by Spencer A Morin (3) "This song tell the story of life." -- Spencer Morin. "love it!" -- Avery Morin. "I LIKE THIS ONE TO SPENS. " -- LOU. I Wish I Knew by Spencer A Morin (4) "At some point in our lives I bet we have a moment when we wonder that." -- S. "I have many, many times. I know the feeling." -- Spencer A Morin. "Who is S.?" -- Spencer A Morin. "omg! i love it but i do not love it as much then brithdays. but i still love it spens." -- LOU. I Was Born... by Emma MacDonald (1) "Pretty good. I will tell you the truth. It could be better." -- Spencer A Morin. How Could I Know? by Spencer A Morin (2) "Don't we all have a moment or moments where we wish we knew the answers to all lour questions?" -- Spencer A. Morin. "i like this one. i like how u put ur ? and . i give u a 10" -- LOU. Going Off To Vegas by Sean Libbey (1) "Dam did you write this for the Stones or something? can totally see this type of song on a new stones album ,like u were written for Mick lol" -- Kevin, LA, CA. Can We Be? by Sean Libbey (1) "Wow this one is great. love the way this flows" -- Joe , Worcester , ma. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 |
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