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Clear-Cut by Erica Young (1) "Very Good written song" -- Matthew Mark, IN, usa. To Find Me by Erica Young (1) "I really like this one. I feel like it has good meaning to it. People can definitly relate to it." -- Holly Mitchell. Why You? by Erica Young (2) "Keep writting, It only gets better with more writting, effort and time. I think you got what it takes" -- Victor, PMB, KZN, South Africa. "Very sensual, though for a song... I'm not quite sure... but don't take it the wrong way because I'm just as bad as you... Just look for a bit more rythm by altering word choice. There are words that could summarize an entire phrase, I've learned." -- Michael J Williams, Redding, CA, USA. The Worst Day by Cali James (1) "Hey i love this message! It is a great review of 9-11" -- Carlie. That Picture by Erica Young (1) "Nice stuff! Although I must say that I want to hear about really personal things. Is that weird? It's just that we all feel the same 'big' feelings: 'Love', 'Hate' 'Sadness' etc. but I like specifics. What did you think, what colour is is hair etc. Like that song by the pixies: "His teeth were white as snow" Man, that's fuckin brilliant lyrics" -- m sowerby. Still by Erica Young (2) "Still one of my faves! lol " -- Nicole. "If you could even out the syllable count in them, they could flow with more solidified rythm..." -- Michael J Williams, CA, USA. Stay Like This by Erica Young (1) "Hello, My Name is Joe Williams, I live in the UK and have a musical website where i place up unsigned singers on my website to sing, i have read your story and your lyrics and have seen how keen you are to sing so i would love to tak you on. Stay like this doesnt catch my eye most songs need to rhyme to get the listeners attention and that doesnt not even inthe chorus but im sure it makes sense when you sing it, if you could get back to me about your singing that would be great my email address is [email protected] and my website is www.music-and-more.co.nr. Hope to be speaking to you soon about your future with music and more. Thanks a lot Joe Williams" -- Joe . Someday, I'm Sure. by Hannah Ellicock (3) "Wow. I was really, really in love with this as i read it. It is smart and hits close to home, but comes across with the ease of a Dr. Suess story! This poem personally reaches me... Well done!" -- Philomena D. Gavod, Alberta, Canada. "amazing xx " -- SarahJayne, manchester, england. "Wow. Thanks (: " -- Author. Gotta Say It by Erica Young (2) "OMG!! i love the song!! The singin' in the rain part was great!! Love ya Superstar!!" -- Nicole. "U can write, u know that!!! am lonving reading your songs. They are really great and you should treasure you gifted tallent coz I think that its huge." -- VIctor. Ever? by Laura Lloyd (3) "This is the first song I've looked at on this website and I just wanted to let you know I really like it. I think its a really good one." -- Emory L Griffin, georgia, USA. "Thank you :)" -- Laura, Bristol, UK. "The opening line here is great. Good lyric. All the best.............peace!" -- Richard, Arlington, Tx, USA. A Million Teardrops by Sarahjayne Lennon (3) "amazing babe ilusm keep up the good work xx " -- Carrie, manchester, england. "wooooo thats welll gdd ilu sis..xxxx" -- chelsea, ashton, manchester, england. "wow amazingglyyy talented :D ly hun x " -- Dean Turner, lewton. Little Thing Called Luck by Holly Mitchell (1) "this one was good... i feel ya.. i've definitely been there too . and what it's worth, i wish you some luck.. i know we can all use a little specially when it comes to love" -- Carla thomson. Shawty Is A Dime by Cedric McClester (1) "definitely made me laugh!" -- km. Say No by Wil Jenkins (1) "Good job! you put a lot of emotion into this piece and I'm glad you finally said no. Keep Up the Good Work Will" -- Ashley Marie, USA. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 |
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