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Between The Lines by Laura Lloyd (3) "Interesting. This could be a song. A blues." -- Richard Evans. "Hey just wanted to say i think your an amazing song writer and im really corny too lol i like all of your stuff keep writing!! :)" -- Dalton Wickersham, seminole, pinnelas, Florida. "wow!.. thank you :)" -- Laura, bristol, uk. Young Love (If Only You Could Feel It) by Bilo (2) "Hey!! I really love these lyrics, really :) " -- laura. "Great lyric. I saw pictures as I read this. Thanks for sharing......................peace!" -- Richard Evans. Since You Broke My Heart by Alex Lawrence (1) "Well, 1st off let me say that some of your lines were preety good. One of them being, I will follow down that road/That lead to the windows of your soul... However, I do think for a song, this is way to short, I also think the structure of your song should rather rhyme vetically then horizontally, furthermore, I think the chorus needs a little work. I would appreciate if you read some of my songs and commented as well." -- Yevgeniy B. Kogosov, Los Angeles, CA, United States. Leave Or Not by Erika Francesca (1) "I like the line "break the ice wall between us and I could get into your world". Strong words...................peace!" -- Richard Evans. I Stay,You Go by Laura Lloyd (2) "Ah, the end of a love affair. You can't get more universal than that. This is heartfelt. What genre (pop, country, r&b)?" -- Richard Evans. "um.... im going to be awkward and say alternative :P" -- Laura, Bristol, UK. I Didn�T Need The Drama by Cedric McClester (2) "Wishful thinking to say the least. When it comes time to punch the ballot or pull that lever, the common sense of intelligent voters will prevail over the hype generated by the liberal media because most people know Obama is a fraud, an angry black man who really hates this country and everything it stands for. Like all egoists and narcissists, he can't resist the urge to reveal himself in his anti-capitalism marxist references and arrogant defiance of traditional values further evidenced by his voting record. It will take more than 98% of black voters, white liberal voters filled with guilt, and stupid hillbillies like yourself to pull this one off. You people just don't get it. More than 61% of likely voters in this country consider themselves conservative and they will always reject extreme leftist and liberal candidates who mock their traditions and values. " -- Richard . "Yeah right!" -- Cedric McClester. Don't Be Shy by Casey Stutzman (1) "In a single paragraph you have summed up one of the challenges of adolescence. Nice work......................peace!" -- Richard Evans. Climbin' The Walls by Laura Lloyd (2) "Get a job and stay away from the computer long enough to go to the library and borrow a book on English grammar and puntuation." -- Lester. "i rushed posting this one, hence the mistakes,gunna correct some though.youre comment has been accepted, however it is not very relavant to the lyrics. But thanks for your contributions." -- Laura. 5 Reasons by Laura Lloyd (2) "I've been playing around with these lyrics and started recording a song with them. Not sure how to reach you, Laura Lloyd. If you get this, email me at [email protected]" -- MICHAEL MCGEEHAN, Boca Raton, FL, United States. "Hey Laura. I am trying to find you on the web. Not much luck. I wrote a song with your lyrics "5 Reasons." Wanted to share it with you. Email me at [email protected]" -- Michael. Two Seconds Too Late by Laura Lloyd (1) "Aw...isn't it horrible when you're just barely too late for something important?! I totally know where you're comin' from. Good one!" -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. Thursday by Ashley E Brown (2) "I don't get it,why are you using roman numerals?" -- Meric Willheimer. "hey, i know this is a really annoying request... but can please ppl critic this... i would LOVE that... and be as RUDE as you want" -- Ashley Brown. The Day I Met You by Pankaj Kwatra (1) "excelentttttttttttttttt" -- khali, ludhiana, punjab, india. Phantom Contact by Escalator (1) "Hmmm...not bad. Not bad at all. I loved "I haven't even got any stubble." Haha." -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. Nuke Luke by Escalator (1) "This Nuke Luke person sounds quite a bit like me. That made it even twice as good! " -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. New York Kiss by Escalator (1) "Wow. That is drama right there. I really liked yer(lol) poem/song." -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. Miracle by Laura Lloyd (1) "It's not cheesy at all. It's very moving, actually. Good job!" -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. Life Is Just A Game by Rebecca Tremblay (2) "Life IS just a game! You are very right. Good!" -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. "oh yeah! life is just a game nothing else.You are right!" -- Asma, Kandy, SLK, Sri Lanka. An Italicized Death by Corey (1) "whoah.. very insightful. great writing :) youre talented." -- Laura. Am I In To Deep? by Laura M (3) "Wow, i love this song, feels like i really know you! baha." -- Emoosh,, London, ?, England. "OMG! I totally know how you feel. You obviously are good at pouring your feelings into your songs. My only suggestion(if I had to have one) is that you shouldn't repeat yourself so much. Still, great job!" -- Angel of Hope, Detroit, MI, USA. ""I'm just too young for this maturity" is a great line. Keep writing..........................peace!" -- Richard Evans. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 |
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