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Used To Be by Chuk H MacDonald (1)
"Nothing really compares. Your so good at what you do!!!! Keep it up, chuk! hehe :):)" -- Christy Mack.


You're One Dream by Chuk H MacDonald (2)
"two" -- robie reno.
"I liked the song. It is clear what the message is. I could almost feel the beat of the background music to it. Very well produced." -- Rose Lynch, Bloomington/Normal, Illinois, United States.


Until Your Love by Chuk H MacDonald (3)
"Your very welcome. You deserve it. This is a sweet song! I would kill for your talent! Why don't you go to a recording studio or something? " -- Christy Mack.
"It is my suggestion to make your sentences longer, to give depth and rhythm.You have a grasp for lyric line , just stick your head out a little more, it won't get blown off." -- Brian O Neil.
"Loved the lyric arrangement great song (Charlie Townsley}" -- Charlie Townsley.


The Way I Think Of You by Chuk H MacDonald (2)
"I found the lyrics to be lonely and mysterious at the same time. As if this woman disappeared from your life suddenly. It's as if you are actually speaking to her when you ask, "Do you ever think of me too?" The verses flowed very well, and I enjoyed reading them!" -- Katie.
"Well I enjoyed reading the song even though I found it to be depressing. It was a sad song, but I liked it. The song flowed together very well and it was easy to follow and keep a beat. The only suggestion I have is to add more verses." -- Jessica Parise, Normal, IL, USA.


A Little Too Close by Chuk H MacDonald (1)
"ONCE AGAIN, you have written a great song. :):) Your very talented." -- Christy Mack.


Playing In Puddles by Chuk H MacDonald (1)
"This is so awesome! It brings back memories! :*( Very good(as usual)! :):)" -- Christy Mack.


Maybe You And I by Chuk H MacDonald (1)
"I really liked the first verse! It's really good. Nice job. :):)" -- Christy Mack, Baltimore, Maryland, USA.


Every Bit Of Your Heart by Chuk H MacDonald (3)
"A very large improvement from your other works. Good job and keep writing like this." -- Meg, BR, LA, USA.
"Nice Hook! I like this alot, makes you feel those punchy blues notes driving through. GOOD JOB!!!" -- Monte, USA.
"I'm new on this site and have only posted twice....just looking around at different people's works and just wanted you to know I really liked this....thanks." -- Leigh, Irvington, AL, USA.


Been There Done That by Chuk H MacDonald (2)
"I ENJOYED YOUR OPERETTA (AS I ENVISION IT TO BE)I WISH IT WERE LONGER. SAYS A LOT IN JUST A FEW WORDS." -- EDITH nISSENBLATT, PEEKSKILL, NEW YORK, USA.
"I sang this instead of reading it while I was reviewing it. It was great! It would make a good country song, hehe. :) Keep it up you are a really good song writer!!!" -- Christy Mack.


Keep Your Distance by Christy Mack (3)
"your song was awsome! dont' stop writeing songs, ur doing an awsome job!" -- Christina.
"Yes Chris, you should listen to this other Chris. The only thing more we could expect of you that you haven't already delivered is the notes that accompany the words, because I'd really like to know the rythm. (I think that's how you spell rythm)" -- EC Allen.
"As Christina said, this really was awesome! I love reading your work as much as you love writing it! " -- JM.


All I Need Is Your Love (Not Sure About Title) by Mueller (3)
"Hi there once again Mueller! I saw that you needed help with the title, and thought maybe I could be of assistance, if you don't mind..... Alright I'll take that as a "no". So here it goes, your title as is, is "All I Need is Your Love". A bit shaky when rolling off the tongue, but mostly a little long (admittedly just like my reviews). Now I'm thinking people always say that all they ever need is love, right? but what about love itself? how do you think it feels? it has needs too right? So how about "Love's Need". As always, just a suggestion." -- EC Allen.
"A really great song. This pretty much tells my dream (I'm in a long distance relationship). A really great song, you're a gifted songwriter. Thanx for the song (from all us lovebirdz ;)" -- Dennis Kanan.
"A wonderful song, with a nice flow. :) " -- Dennis Kanan.


Where'd You Go by Ranay Mueller (3)
"I really like this song!!! But, I have a CD with a song called "Where'd you go" so you might wanna change the title. :):)" -- Christy Mack.
"I LIKED THE SONG AND YOU DONT HAVE TO CHANGE THE TITLE THERE ARE A LOT OF SONG'S WITH THE SAME TITLE" -- kp, MD, USA.
"this is a very good song you have a lot of talent " -- seana, halifax, n.s, canada.


Undo This Forever Loss by Christy Mack (1)
"good job!" -- Christina.


The Cold Beneath The Light by Rick B. Baber (3)
"This was a good write. I love John Cougar Mellencamp so had to read this . I agree. and it was good.." -- Peggy.
"I don't get it. I am standing beneath the light right now and it is 90 degrees. The sun is a hot bitch early September in Northwest Arkansas. Oh, wait a minute, you are not talking about the sun. Never mind. I get it now. This is really good stuff." -- OfficerObie, springdale, arkansas, usa.
"This is very good, very deep. I am discovering more about my son every day - his talents are endless! Peggy Baber" -- Peggy Baber, Bella Vista, Arkansas, USA.


Open Your Heart by Ranay Mueller (2)
"I'm not really into this kind of music, but If you put some kind of beat to it, I don't see any reason why I wouldn't wanna check it out. Right now, it sounds like a love poem to me. Nice :-)" -- Kimberly De Liz.
"an AWESOME flow! This is cool, if you put some music and a beat to it I'm sure it would be a great song!!! :):)" -- Christy Mack.


Little Girl by John Heckel (1)
"This is one of the best songs I've seen so far on this site. You're a very gifted songwriter. This is a great song, really." -- Dennis Kanan.


I'll Tell You A Secret by Christy Mack (1)
"you did such an awsome job writeing this i like it so much! " -- Christina.


Down From The Balcony by Jaded Angelll (1)
"I really liked this one! Keep it up, you have a lot of talent! :):)" -- Christy Mack.


Don't Promise Me by Jaded Angelll (1)
"That is so good! It had a great beat!" -- Christy Mack.


Walk Away Real Slow by Christy Mack (3)
"AWSOME JOB laura!!!!never give up" -- Christina McClay.
"It examplifies how poetry turned into vocal/instrumental music ages ago. Originally the two were separate, but then somebody got the idea of putting instruments and flowing rhyming words together. As I said this is a perfect example of this." -- EC Allen.
"You have done it again! My thoughts exactly. Keep up the great work!" -- JM, Michigan.


Never Tell A Soul by Christy Mack (2)
"Hi Christy, I'm a guy, but I know the feeling refering to the meaning of your song. I've been attracted to many a lady, but a few really stand out as women I could have very much loved, but was forced to let go, in some cases never telling them. One girl I even danced with her on her wedding day at the reception, talk about a hard thing to do, but if you knew me you'd know that I'm a great guy and that's why I did it. Good luck in your writing aspirations." -- EC Allen.
"I really liked this one. Thank you for sharing your songs. You have expressed so accurately what I have felt in my own heart." -- JM.


I'm Proud Of You by L Chapman (1)
"Ok...this was kind of not origional. I could tell it was just thrown together. I like your other stuff better." -- christy mack.


Dont Want To Let You Go by Ranay Mueller (7)
"Ok. That was terrible. But I was reviewing to let everyone know that the word "you're" means "you are". The word "your" is possesive. GET IT STRAIGHT." -- Meg.
"There's reviewing and there's bashing. It may be a subtle distinction... but Meg, you sound more like a bitch with heartache, than someone interested in helping others improve their performance." -- Sean Porter.
"How clearly the calm observer views the stream, Meg...the crystal's clearer for the stranger than the fish in water. Good call, Sean." -- Tyrant.
"Hmm... well, I get the part where you 'really love him' as you say, but dammit, does he love you BACK? I don't get that vibe from this... song?... and plainly it sounds like every pop song that ever existed, and some originality would be severely appreciated if it is possible in pop culture... but if you meant this to be a rap song, I can TOTALLY see where you're comin from, though I seriously doubt it would sell very well. " -- Kimberly De Liz.
"As if Tyrant has any right to chastise anyone for bashing." -- Meg.
"I was referring to the bitch with heartache comment." -- Tyrant.
"First of all, yes Meg, you are a bitch with a heartache. Secondly, this was way too typical for praise. It's too regular. I think you got more in you than the normal Faith Hill you're the air I breathe and you wipe my tears and make me laugh stuff that has been said so many times before. If you just start writing, keep writing, you'll start writing things you never knew you had in you. And then you'll have something truly fantastic! :):) You have potential." -- Christy Mack.


34th Street by L Chapman (1)
"this was a very good poem. great detail and explanation. i thought it made perfect sense the way it all tied in to the title at the end." -- kurt defenbaugh, normal, il, us.


Bring Me by Mia Angello (2)
"I like it. Reminds me of something that Disturbed might try." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"it's something i might try...lol" -- mia.


Here To Stay by Samantha Carter (2)
"Great job, Samantha. I liked the little kid comparison the best, it gives the reader a good feel of the kind of mood you want. But the rest of it was a little lulled, a little duller, but still a good sign of heart. Keep it up." -- Kimberly De Liz.
"if you are 16 i am 6 years of age" -- northern star.


Raisin In The Sun by Fizzgig McArthur (2)
"��Kewl goinG��" -- Kimberly De Liz.
"Just finished all the poetry and music. Wonderful work, Fizzgig!! " -- Maryla.


Join The Stars by R Wood (2)
"hey i printed your song can i sing it if i get started please email me w/ the info" -- jeff, ohio, ohio, usa.
"It would help if you told me your e-mail address!" -- Rowan Wood.


Eight Years Old by R Wood (1)
"That was a very good read, you have a great ability to set a mood and an emotion. I enjoyed it. Keep it up!" -- Christy Mack.


Rainy Monday by Rosario Perez (1)
"this is an awesome and meaningful song. i really love it. " -- Delia , USA.


Road Runnin by Fizzgig McArthur (1)
"I wish I could hear this song, I bet it sounds great. Could you elaborate a little on the "organ solo" part, though?" -- Dr. Iceman, Milwaukee, WI, USA.


Eyes Wide Open by Jenine Marie Graschuk (5)
"This song was full of emotion and feeling. I am unsure of the objective of your song, but the lyrics were well-written and thoughtful." -- Julie Fehrenbacher, Elwin, Illinois, United States.
"I enjoyed the flow of the song and the emotion. I was not quite sure where the lyrics were going or what it was truly about but I enjoyed it anyway. It sounded good, flowed good, and was good." -- Jason Wodzien, Normal, Illinois, USA.
"I enjoyed the flow of the song and the emotion. I was not quite sure where the lyrics were going or what it was truly about but I enjoyed it anyway. It sounded good, flowed good, and was good." -- Jason Wodzien, Normal, Illinois, USA.
"Come on you guys. Don't you know a good song when you read it. This was true to the word. I guess you had to be there. Keep it up, Jenine" -- kelly, canada.
"This was well thought out, enjoyed the truth in it and the verses worked well with the emotions reflected. However, this piece should have been posted under Poetry section, as it makes for an excellent poem, but I could not hear a song here." -- Monte, USA.


Heart Be Still by Genesis (1)
"Good Job!! I like this alot, lyrically flows and easy to hear a song with this one! " -- Monte.


The Hardest Part by Genesis (2)
"i just want to know if this song has been published and if I can use it in my home town band? Thanx!" -- Tommy, Canada.
"are you that lesbian chick from the Real World? her name was Genesis too." -- Danny Gonzales.


Alone by Sabriel (2)
"I like this one. It's real. You can write well, especially for your age." -- Christy Mack.
"wow I'm impressed! You sure you're only 12?" -- Michelle.


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