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Sunday Morning by Gregory Novak (1) "I think you write fantasticly. Its asad story but often they are thes best. Your writing was very easy to read and just seemed to flow. Well done" -- Snazi. The Terrorist Fulcrum by John J Yezman (2) "This a good Story but it is "SHOCKING" I am a veteran and know that if this would be put into operation and carried out and completed it would have a horrible result for the Country I hope this type of attack will NEVER happen " -- Jerry Ganza, Chicago, IL, U.S.. "This story opened my eyes I am a nuclear tech. and realized for the first time that our nuclear power facilities could be captured and used to make a dirty nuclear bomb what a catastrophic image this story tells. " -- Lisa paidlyn, San Jose, California, U.S.. Lid by Randall Barfield (1) "Me again. I just wanted to let you know that I could not tire of your stories these are great. They are very thought out with just the right twist of horror thrown in." -- Emory L Griffin, georgia, USA. Normally A Gentle Man by Randall Barfield (1) "its pretty touching ((:" -- cherie. Warm Night by Randall Barfield (1) "I like this story quite a bit, it would be a really good read if you did one of these a bit longer. Please don't think I'm only leaving a review in order for one back, I truly enjoy your stories. I left you a question under 1 to 3 turns." -- Emory, Georgia, USA. The Death Of O'brian by Alexander Steen Stewart (2) "Let me start off by saying that I'm a huge fan! Brilliantly written story. it kept me hooked till the end. I loved it! KEep writing more!" -- Pri, New Delhi, India. "htry" -- shafeeq salman, perinthalmanna, india, kerala. The Little Old Lady Gets Even by Vera Louch (The Tea Lady) (1) "The story is pretty good. Keep in mind, paragraphs must be indented and separated. Remember to proofread the story before send (see the word anaything, perhaps you meant anything). " -- marbry, St. Louis, MO, usa. Shades Of Grey by W L Dz (1) "It is a little rough. You need to work on your grammer, and maybe your delivery. Otherwise, this is a great story. I would encourage you to develope it farther, you might turn this into a novel." -- James. Flavor Of The Month Rant by Katmandoo (5) "Hello - not sure if you want advice on a relationship or on writing. If it's writing - this is a nicely written piece. If it's relationships then I say end it - end it now and get someone who will give their all to you" -- me. "are you a male or female? thanks for the comments on the writing. i feel like i dont deserve any better right now." -- katmandoo. "Female! You always do. I know nothing about you but I know his type and he'll stretch the limits of your sanity. You don't need that." -- me. "thanks for your advice!" -- kat. "Good prose..........relationship issues .........engaging tale telling truth hopefully. " -- Partha Pratim, Kolkata, India. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 |
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