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Wet Dreams. by Terry Collett (1) "Well... I think this is gr8! I am having the same kind of dreams with a teacher of mine... You should read "Got Your Teacher to Love", a song written by me... Though it's about infatuation, not wet dreams... " -- Charlotte Juliet Weasley. The Screaming, The Anger, The Hurt And The Pain by Jasmine P Batey (2) "Without sounding too picky, this is very very very similar to your sister's "my imagination". Why mimic when you have your own style? no in saying that, I like it." -- Frankie. "Actually I agree with you, I was a bit worried about that when I put it up. but oh well, I might take it down? glad you like it though." -- Jasmine, The Auther. The Only Casualty by Jasmine P Batey (1) "wow, pretty awesome!" -- Frankie. Something More by Veronica Habib (1) "I like it! But... I think you messes up the wording a bit at the end... "Why is it, that the men are always is heard" is what you have! But I like it, it conjures up a great image, harsh image but great nevertheless. Would love to see some more :)" -- Chloe. One Of These Days by Jasmine P Batey (4) "I like it, It's fantastic! I thought you might have put a sad turn on it though, I see we're going to have to work on happiness! haha, this is great! I'm glad you accepted the challenge. Fancy another one?" -- Frankie, Australia Mate. "jazz, it's lauren. I love this. my favourite. times infinety. its wonderful. honestly. btw, is it about a friend of ours ? lol. lauren.xx" -- sam cracker, sydney, NSW, australia. "Thanks both of you, I was a bit worried it was a rush job, but I guess not! ha ha it only took about 15 minutes to write! but Loz, its about someone we both know..." -- jasmine B. "Ha ha I just realized this poem is a bit stalkerish!" -- Jasmine, The Auther. Is It Worth Being Alone? by Jasmine P Batey (2) "aw jazz. if this is real, it's not worth changing. i'm always here for you mate. btw, it's really good" -- sam cracker, sydney, NSW, australia. "Hell yeah it's real!" -- Jasmine, The Auther. Jarred Lopez by Mimi (1) "Beautiful. I'd like to know more, could you email me please? I am curious, I think this is about my nephew who passed away so I want to hear more if it is. I want know what kind of person he was, this poem tells me things." -- Britney, Albuq, NM, U.S. . Is It Real? by Mimi (1) "I really enjoyed it. I especially liked the rhyme pattern. I'll definetly check out your other writings. Keep on writing! :)" -- Luis Felipe Moura, S�o Paulo, SP, Brazil. The Sex Was Better. by Terry Collett (1) "Found this piece intriguing. The meter was conisistent and strong, but the rhymes in the second half threw me off--kind of half prose, half rhyme. That's what made me read it a couple more times. I liked it. Hope relations with your in-laws will improve over time." -- Dixie, VA. What Saved Me by Katherine Smith (1) "My story ended a month ago..and I burned the chapters of this book. After the abuse and years swept by..some things are not worth fighting for--Too bad I didn't run when I had the chance huh? " -- Kathryn. The Title Is Why by C Simnitt (1) "Is it not funny that we make our wishes on dying stars... I wish I could answer why... I like the way you said you will not change the title of your poem... Because the title is Why... I have used your method already... And I have written and complained about putting a monopoly on title names when the monopoly should be on the author's name... I think more of us should write and complain... Good for you... BrokenWordsPoet... " -- James W. McRight Jr., Ruffin , SC, USA. Taking Time by Jina Kaye (1) "I often find that it is so easy to put words on paper.. Instead of saying them out loud... And in these times that we spend talking to paper... The mind knows what it wants to say... But the lips want say until we put it on paper... OK! Let me use the common word; love your work... BrokenWordsPoet......" -- James W. McRight Jr., Ruffin, SC, USA. On The Ledge by Katherine Smith (1) "Wonderful build up to the last to the last lines... Which are as perfect as any ending should be... Take from someone who has walked the edge of that final step... BrokenWordsPoet... Read my posting Counting To Three........ " -- James W. McRight Jr., Ruffin , SC, USA. Distant Star. by Terry Collett (1) "This is really nice!!!" -- Charlotte Juliet Weasley. Books & Photographs. by Terry Collett (1) "Yes my friend we all do it... I have found in thrift stores... All kinds of thing tuck in the pages of books... Postcards, photos, even flowers and once I found the biggest Merry-J leaves I have ever seen... Not to say that I have seen that many... I don't know if it is Merry-J or Mary-J... But when I find a treasure tucked between the pages of a book... The treasure is mine... I liked your poem... Laughter makes you live longer... And you deserve a review... BrokenWordsPoet..." -- James W. McRight Jr., Ruffin, SC, USA. And So It Goes....... by Alberto Pupo (1) "I like this poem... It shows how one can question and say so very much with few words... Instead of going on for page after page... And by the end of the work you forget what the question was... Or you put it down because the answer is so far away... BrokenWordsPoet..... " -- James W. McRight Jr., Ruffin, SC, USA. 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