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Wisps Of Air by Jt Ewing (1) "very good. I used to write alot of poetry, and this poem made me realize how much I missed doing it. Vince" -- vince o'neal, vincennes, ind, usa. While God........... by Colin Baker (4) "Never happen! Anyway, He gave mankind free will. If we're enslaved, it's because we did it to ourselves. How boring a life it must be for ahteists and agnostics who cannot accept anthing as truth without tangible evidence. The funny thing about tangible(scientific)evidence is that most of it is actually far more theorectical than tangible. " -- Richard. "I think it is already happening and indeed has been now, for the past few hundred years, at least here in western Europe. On a general point, I can't understand why God apparently makes us as we are, and then expects us to spend our entire lives seeking pardon for the sins we commit. Surely that's His fault from a logical perspective isn't it? " -- Colin Baker. "Without getting into futile re-hashing over concepts that theologians and biblical historians have debated for centuries, I choose to take a very humble approach to it all. That's the problem with atheists and agnostics. They have no humility and actually believe they can figure it all out. The problem with your "general point" that it's all His fault from a logical perspective is that your logical perspective is fallible and cannot in anyway compete with the infallible logic(if one can even apply the term logic to God) of a Supreme Being. This wonderful mystery of God and his creation, I sincerely believe, was never meant to be understood even by those possessing the highest levels of intelligence among us. Of course, I'm fully aware that the evolutionists and the atheistic scientific community would scoff at this simplistic analysis because most of these elitists consider organized religion tantamount to mythology and fairy tales, functioning as a crutch for the weak, the poor, and the hopeless. Now on with my simplistic approach, which is based upon the Judeo-Christian principles formulated by the scriptures and the ten commandments. These tenets merely tell us how we should live our lives. However, God gave us free will and because most of us are weak, we are repetitive sinners. God is merciful and does not abandon those who sincerely repent. However, He cannot be deceived by those who mock His tolerance. For those who do not believe this, His wrath awaits them. Their fate may be very much like the tuna in the old StarKist tuna fish commercial. " Sorry Charlie, only the finest tuna get to be Starkist." To carry simplicity to the ultimate level is to view all that surrounds us, observing intermittant hiccups of nature such as hurricanes, tornados, earthquakes, tidal waves, volcanic eruptions, forest fires etc., knowing that the magnificent Choreographer responsible for all of this is definitely not of this world. " -- Richard. "Richard, God bless you!" -- Colin. Where My Thoughts Lay by Carla Thomson (1) "Great job Carla like always " -- Matthew Mark@, USA. When It Knocks by Carla Thomson (1) "That is so U" -- Matthew Mark@, USA. What's Still Worst by Jahri Ann (1) "i am in total agreement; only in the line "but out" shouldn't "but" be spelled "butt"...to get the full effect...?" -- georgia enoch. The Sense Of Love by Mike Piotrowski (1) "At least until Christmas anyway. " -- Richard. The Memory Of You by Tara Bridget Moore (3) "Very good job Very!" -- Matthew Mark@, USA. "Thank-you Mathew, I appreciate the review. " -- Tara. "The memory of you- tara bridged moore" -- Anja, Vanderbijlpark, Johannesburg, Gauteng. Restless Slumber by Carla Thomson (2) "Smiles deep" -- Matthew Mark@, USA. "The line "waiting for my heart and mind to agree" is memorable. Sounds like a song. Good luck...........peace!" -- Richard. Rape by Little A (2) "Is this word "insdoe" supposed to be "inside" ? Otherwise, nice work." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom. "I get this...all to well. However one need not succumb to what feels on the inside to be finality..." -- mattie. My Lover My Friend by C Parnell (1) "this is just what my man iz" -- zandile. My Eternity by R Soon (1) "A very lovely poem." -- Evan, Edmonton, Alberta, Canada. Midnight Snack by C E Wynkoop (1) "Nice work. If you want to read more vampyre tales, check out some of my stuff. Write on." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom. Matt by Chloe L Batey (2) "Beautiful Chic, he would have loved that and he will help you...." -- mel. "Hey Mel! Thankyou! Unfortuanately it didn't turn out as well as Dale's one. But yeah I tried my best. " -- Chloe. Keep 'em Guessing by Curious (3) "There's an old adage about women. The same things that once atracted them to you may one day cause them to despise you. You can count on it. " -- Richard. "thanks for the review, that mystery of the way women think is one of the things i like best, it certainly keeps me on my toes." -- curious. "Curious to see if curious is still around. Seems Storymania has seen its prime..." -- Briony. Hope You're Lucky by Carla Thomson (1) "cool good story" -- Matthew Mark@, USA. From Darkness You Bring Light by Tara Bridget Moore (2) "This left me in awe...one word...beautiful" -- mattie. "Thank-you mattie, I appreciate your review!" -- Tara. Explosion! by Alexis Winchy (1) "That actually happened? That's hillarious!" -- Sean, Boston, Massachutets, USA. Bulletproof Lonliness by Little A (1) "This is good stuff. You should go back and edit out the typos though. A new place can definitely suck, but it will get better." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom. Bryna by R Bennett Okerstrom (5) "sorry to hear about ur mom. even though the words weren't said, chances are good she knew. " -- curiious (just a guy). "This touched me so deeply! I am so sorry for your loss. I do understand how hard it is. My dad died a month and a half ago. The pain is indescribable. I agree with jag. Please believe your mother knew how much she meant to you and how much you loved her. Thank you so much for sharing this and know you are not alone." -- JM. "Thank you. Unfortunately my 22 month old son won't get to know her and she won't get to know him. :-(" -- R. Bennett. "I have worn these shoes. I'd like to think they know." -- Royal D. "I love this! At least you could voice your feelings here, which means, I am guessing, your Mom "sensed" much of this in her life. I miss her tons! She always took great care of us." -- cousin!. Bald by T J Rintoull (2) "Simply buy a toupee' but make sure it's a good one." -- Lester. "Hahaha nice one. The poem was designed to be mildly deeper than that - but why buy a toupee when I can go the whole hog and get an 18th century style wig? Woo hoo!" -- T J Rintoull. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 |
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