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I Am A Rose by M Q Walters (17) "how beautiful!" -- Dri Cook. "Thank-you Dri :}" -- mattie. "you talk about roses and suicide! A contradiction! People are contradictory most of the time. Some more, some less. We just can't be like that all the time! But I think this is what makes life more interesting. May I ask you how old you are? That's ok if you don't answer me:-)I like your writing!" -- Dri. "I don't mind answering your question...as of today I am 43 yrs old...wonder though why that seems to matter. Suicide and roses not so contradictory, do roses not wither and die when picked? I like your writing too...:) " -- mattie. "beautiful work here mattie." -- Just A Guy. "thank you Ed...:)" -- mattie. "I never meant to be rude or offensive with my comments. I just think it is nice to share ideas. Keep up with your good work. This one is really nice. Especially the title! " -- dri. "Thank you Dri...and your comments were neither rude nor offensive...but complimenatry...again thank you :)" -- mattie. "Yes, you are a rose, and a beautiful and delicate one. I know it. Why don't you? " -- Bill, Richmond, VA. "Thank you, Bill...but a rose is not about beauty...but fragility" -- mattie. "I feel a rose posseses both beauty and fragility.I believe a rose means different things to different people.When i give a rose to my wife I'm telling her I love her but then the rose makes me sad because it dies so soon representing how fragile it is.Nice Poem." -- David D. "For me the rose in this piece represented fragility. Wild flowers picked for me (especially daisies) represent love for me...because it takes more effort and thought...lol! Silly I think. I have gotten tired of hearing how beautiful I am...which I think is another feeling I tried to express...beauty fades. Pick your wife some daisies! :)" -- mattie. "But, you are so beautiful. Not just on the outside." -- vance. "I'll pick you daisies!" -- vance. "lol Vance...how sweet." -- mattie. "This really is abeautiful poem Mat" -- Mandi. "Thanks Mandi xoxo" -- mattie. A Victim by Robert A Ferguson (1) "great piece of writing.he's good." -- kennedy, lagos, lagos, nigeria. I Like Your Smile by Kennedy O Obohwemu (5) "I loved it! Very good word usage keep up the good work =)" -- Karina, San Diego, CA, United States. "impressive!touching!.keep it up!" -- nkechi, abraka, delta, nigeria. "impressive and inspiring." -- sylvia, Abraka, DELTA STATE,, nigeria. "very nice!" -- maureen, benin, edo, nigeria. "A wonderful piece, i love it." -- albert, zaria, kaduna, nigeria. Mark Of My Pain by Robert A Ferguson (2) "God that is depressing" -- Michelle. "This is good writing...very visual. I liked this, Robert. " -- e. rocco caldwell. Must Move On by Kennedy O Obohwemu (1) "this beautiful poem gives us hope! Been there!" -- Dri. Love Is The Answer! by Dri Cook (1) "your right love is the answer, to bad we all can't see that " -- k poffenberger, USA. Love Me! by Dri Cook (2) "really good work. hope to read more of your work " -- e daugherty. "thank you so much for leaving feedback and I hope you can get to read some more!" -- Dri. The Extra Mile by Kennedy O Obohwemu (1) "beautiful!! Yes, we can go the extra mile...always!!!" -- Dri. Somewhere In Time by Dri Cook (3) "this is beautiful, such hope. I like it alot. You might want to change "will" to "we'll" :)" -- KM. "okay! Will do it. Thanks for your comments! Glad you liked it. Dri" -- Dri Cook. "this was filled with hope...where would one be without atleast a pinch of that? Nicely written...thanx for your review on my "I am A Rose" :)" -- mattie. Decay by Deadjerry (2) "first attempt, not too happy about certain parts. more to come, along with modifications..." -- deadjerry. "Thought your use of words and imagary was good here, Good! Good!" -- Buxton. Frightened Little Girl! by Dri Cook (2) "Alas! The past is what we are, what makes up our being...as a child grief is such an overpowering emotion that changes what we could have ever been...I know :)" -- mattie. "Dri...you tell the tale so well. We all have our inner child within us and often it takes a lifetime to heal that child. Seems like you're on the right track. Nice work!" -- KM (Michelle). Someone Without You by Rae (1) "WOW i never saw this one and looks like u wrote it a year ago. WOW its so powerful!!" -- km. 'blah' To This Feeling I Have by E Daugherty (2) "wow" -- Josh. "sure i can say "i love you", there i just said it and i don't even know you...blush!" -- sunny, dc, usa. Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz by Buxton (1) "the last two lines says all! Great." -- Dri. Your Kiss, A Collection Of Verse by Nikhil Parekh (1) "Yes, yes, yes! Your poetry is wonderful. It has a unique taste and style. There is wonderful usage of language in these of your stanzas. I'm not a bing poem lover but several of your poems were delights! " -- e. rocco caldwell. Wise Up by Duke Sekhon (1) "I can't belive no one left a review on such a wonderful poem. Duke, you are very good!" -- e. rocco caldwell. Where Love And Sorrow Meet by Kennedy O Obohwemu (2) "Very heartwarming and moving; I enjoy the meaning you convayed here in the poem. Excellent work!!!" -- AuthorNinjaearth. "Very very good work. Sensitive writer." -- Avis, Mumbai, India. When Your Not Here With Me... by E Daugherty (2) "very nice, very elagant and beautiful" -- kidane, alexandria, VA, VA. "an excellent poem, keep up the good work" -- a bhambra, Hayes, Great Britain, Middlesex. Waving Goodbye by Sasu (3) " This has good tempo, and somewhat of a tear-jerker - good job!" -- christine. "Very nice...:)" -- mattie. "Cheers guys, much appreciated :)" -- Sasu. Today by Jack Roland Butter (3) "very nice. like the staccota style" -- Avis, Mumbai, India. "THANKS FOR THE REVIEW. THIS IS MY FAVOURITE OF ALL MY POEMS BECAUSE IT'S COME RIGHT FROM THE HEART AND MY FEELINGS ABOUT THE WORLD TODAY." -- Jack. "I like the way you use the words, sensitive and powerful,great poem!" -- Sara Bernal, vienna, Austria. To Warm Me by Rae (5) "Okay! That was passionate! I could feel what she was feeling in the lines you wrote. I didn't quite like the beat of the poem but it flowed well. There is such turmoil in this poem and I think poem should capture desire, turmoil and pain...wonder ...etc. Rae, I enjoyed this alot." -- e. rocco caldwell. "nice to see you full of hope rae, nice job and good luck" -- Just A Guy. "simple and passionate. Beautiful! Dri Cook" -- dri cook, sao paulo, sp, brasil. "Rae...omg! This is beautiful...I really love the repeating of the words, the kiss and the lips...its so warm and sensual. Great job!" -- km. "Is sweet and filled with warmth...hope it's real and lasting for you :)" -- mattie. To Someone by E Daugherty (2) "Beautiful" -- Josh. "Then why wont you answer it Josh" -- Aryka. Think Of Me by Rae (3) "Awwwwwwwww this is so good!!!! Such depth and feeling....great piece Rae!" -- KM (Michelle). "Beautifully constructed Rae...very moving." -- taylor. "gosh.....beautiful!!! wonderful!" -- Dri. The Man In The Moon by Jack Roland Butter (3) "Thought this was a good poem, although the CAPS things is a bit much, a good healthy poem never-the-less:)" -- Buxton. "Thanks for the great review, the CAPS weren't intentional!" -- Jack. "I'd post this poem in "fantasy" or "mystical" section if I were u. Drama is not appropriate. Its a lovely poem though. very pretty and mystical." -- Avis, Mumbai, India. Sweet Poetry by Dri Cook (2) "I can pick up on the education you have had in the humanities...tere a strong classical tone in this poem. I'm not the biggest fan of love poem but I did like this one" -- e. rocco caldwell. "thanks for your comment, rocco ... it is always welcome! I can tell this is one of my favorites!!!!" -- dri cook. Snowfall by J Shartzer (2) "Beautifully written...don't change a thing :)" -- KM (Michelle). "Short sweet and lovely." -- Aryka. Shadows At Dawn by Sasu (3) "Short and sweet bro :)" -- Buxton. "you sicko! reviewing yourself! isn't that illegal?!? ;) good stuff..." -- deadjerry. "More than likley, thanks for the top review though. even if it's not my work:(((" -- buxton. Shades by Sara Bernal (4) "I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW MORE" -- patricia. "A few words for something truly deep. Great!" -- Brian. "I feel the same. I want to read more of yours poems, it is posible?" -- Petter Downson. "Short poem and you said everything." -- Claudio Biel. Roses Are Beautiful! by Dri Cook (1) "Great ending! I loved this, it was very clever. Every rose has its thorn." -- Moses M. Constable. Random Musings by Duke Sekhon (3) "Interesting...nice style" -- km. "You nailed it again, Duke!" -- e. rocco caldwell. "Human nature relishes praise no end but finds it hard to ingest a morsel of criticism. Thanks for your words of praise --- should criticism come my way, I'll accept it with equal equanimity." -- Duke. My Teacher by Jack Roland Butter (3) "well done. i dont think u succeed very well in the suspense angle, but nonetheless a good effort. keep it up" -- Avis, Mumbai, India. "Thanks Avis for yet another great review. Suspense isn't the theme I'm aiming at and I wrote it because I feel strongly about violence in a household." -- Jack Roland Butter. "HI JRB. Thanks for ur reviews on my work. Muchos gracias senor! I wanna read more of your work. Where is it???? Keep it coming. Abt this poem: U make the reader empathise with your feelings. I dinna mean to imply that I dinna like this poem. I like it a lot. :) " -- Avis, Mumbai, India. Mirror Games by Rae (1) "I liked this one a lot....nicely done" -- KM (Michelle). Milly The Master Dog by Emma Moore (3) "cute:)" -- mattie. "Good fun.." -- PJM. "for those who love dogs...just like myself!" -- Dri. Meaningful Things by Samantha Carter (1) "This is a very concise and well written poem. I like the visuals you used but I didn't quite understand why these things are meaningful to you? You mentioned them as if to say...these are meaningful because I say so...but why? " -- e. rocco caldwell . Live, Just Live!! by Dri Cook (5) "Excellent work, liked the message! :)" -- Buxton. "Great poem! " -- Theo, Maple Ridge, BC, Canada. "thank you so much! " -- Dri. "Holy cow this is pretty powerful. Repeating Live, Just Live really drove home your point. Wow." -- Steven. "thanks, Steven!" -- Dri. I Know You Hear Me, But Are You Listening??? by Dri Cook (4) "Dri, this is really good - you've a way of making difficulties seem clear and simple. Sorry i've been tardy in making comments, you do a good job in just about all you write." -- Just A Guy. "What a compliment, thank you so much! Yes, my dear, it is that simple, trust me...been there!! All you need is to keep your faith!! The rest God will always do for you!! " -- Dri. "If we would all only fight for a better world...how much bettera world we would have to pass on to our children :)" -- mattie. "yes, Mattie...you got it! Thanks:-)" -- Dri. I Don't Belong by Bethaney Dawn Larock Bdl (1) "Bethaney,I truly enjoyed your poem. I too am of Native American/French Canadian descent.Are you by any chance related to Norman "Two Feathers" LaRock? If so, my dad and he were cousins! Please e-mail me; we may be related! Sincerely, Arvis" -- Arvis LaRock Dionne. I Died For You by Karina Lizet Perez (5) "i liked this a lot... i can relate lately. sometimes our emotions get the best of us..." -- rae. "Thanks Rae. This is a poem i wrote for a contest im having at my high school" -- Karina, San Diego, CA, United States. "I'm not sure how your high school will react to this poem. It's very visual and the title might turn some teachers off, not to mention the subject matter. Sorry to get all preachy like that on you but..." -- Steven. "Good luck anyway!" -- Steven. "Hey karina, this poem is great. The school was wrong to give you second place, you deserved 1rst!!!" -- Rosa. God Is Never Late! by Dri Cook (6) "How brilliant! It puts across a great and unusual idea and is really well written !!!" -- Jack. "Thank you, Jack...thank you so much!" -- Dri. "HE IS ALWAYS AT THE RIGHT TIME FOR HIS REASON, HE IS OUR DESTINY.WITHOUT HIM WE ARE EMPTY VESSELS WITH AN UNENDING THIRST, FLOATING ON AN ENDLESS SEA." -- Brian O Neil. "what a beautiful thought...and how true!! Thanks, Brian!" -- Dri. "Ah! This one made me smile & feel warm inside..looking forward to reading more of your work!" -- RAM, usa. "YOUR RIGHT AND I THINK A LOT OF PEOPLE CAN RELATE TO THIS BECAUS IT HAS A LOT OF WISDOM IN IT AND WISDOM COMES FROM THE WORD OF GOD AND I THINK GOD BLESSED YOU WITH THIS GIFT. " -- K. POFFENBERGER, USA. Flowers That Only Last A Day by Peter Rivendell (2) "can feel every bit of pain in this, hope it's just writing. not much fun waiting for the phone to ring. nice to see you back Peter." -- Just A Guy. "I, like JAG know these feelings all to well...roses fade...and hope that if at all it was but a brief moment :)" -- mattie. First Kiss by Rachel Weisenfeld (2) "beautiful!" -- KM(Michelle). "Thanks!" -- Rachel. Envy Yourself by Buxton (2) "I mean not to be controversial with that last piece, so plz don't take any offence, it's just writing:))" -- Buxton. "It has a dark and meaningful edge and is a great emphatic poem." -- Jack Roland Butter, -, -, -. D�j� Vu by B Galindo (2) "beautiful!" -- Dri. "...puts one in a sort of trance like state; as though the instance when the memory of the future was being remembered from the past...!" -- ill wil. Daddy Come Back by Karina Lizet Perez (1) "Really sad man. Like....really sad man. Good....but like...sad man. " -- Jono. Close Your Eyes! by Dri Cook (5) "hey Dri, there you go again. Nice...Love, John!" -- John, Ventura, CA. "thanks, John. Always nice hearing from you!" -- Dri. "A nice contrast between the material and spritual." -- Doug Whipple. "thanks, Doug!! thanks for being this wonderful friend and for encouraging me so very much! " -- Dri. "Dri, voce realmente � muito sens�vel e especial. Seus poemas me emocionaram e tenho certeza que cada um deles, � um peda�o da hist�ria de amor de cada pessoa que est� lendo." -- Antonio V. Jord�o, S�o Jos� dos Campos, S�o Paulo, Brasil. Cellar Door by Reagan Rothe (9) "This is deep, deep shit man!!! I loved all of it, especially "But the glass shatters... love is left behind", have to read more of your stuff." -- Phil H, Orlando, FL, USA. "Rothe... excellent! Reminiscent of passed poets. I needed my dictionary at hand. This piece made me want to put on a long gauzy white gown and listen to the rustle as I brush past the flowers in the courtyard. Bravo! Deb" -- D. G. Williford. "Thanks D.G.! I'm extremely flattered you enjoyed one of my pieces and it was so touching to you personally... " -- Rothe, TX. "I liked this because of the style and have visual it is but some of the words were out of my means and sort of turned me off. There were some really good stanzas such as the final one with the usage of the cellar door that's ajarred...I don't think you need cracked ajar between it's sort of repeats itself. But this is very powerful visually. All and all a very strong poem dealing with relationship and worthy to be published." -- e. rocco caldwell. "Masterful work... Haven't read something this fascinating in a long time!!!" -- JJ, The Miss. ""uxorial needs"?? "a hubbub for a new beginning"? this was taken to another level and paints a surreal image during a time of sadness, most inspiring - "forever they walk hand in hand..." left me in tears, rae" -- Rae. "I typically don't review poetry because it's difficult to be objective about the form and I know in my message I said I wouldn't review any work that wasn't either literary or genre (so please don't think me a liar for having reviewed it anyway), but when I saw your request I could not refuse it. Review: As esoteric poems go "Cellar Door" is in the proper gear. It seems to be making some kind of point, but due to its intrinsically esoteric nature the point is lost on this reader. The only thing I'd suggest is replacing the word "uxorial" with a slightly more common term to help the layman reader follow the piece without lingering to study the first time through reading." -- JA St. George. "Most brilliant and worth reading more than once!!! (Agrees with the majority)!!!" -- Suzanne, Florida. "WOW! I swear I'm not saying this because you gave my story a good review, but this is great. I loved it!" -- Brayn King. Be With Me!! by Dri Cook (3) "Dear Adriana, Great writing, very powerfull, love the words. Only one note, the end is for me to much and to long the word love. I love sofar what you have write down and thanks for chatting. Greetings, Theo" -- Theo, Maple Ridge, BC, Canada. "Dear Theo, thank you so much for your feedback. The long end has a purpose...I did want to emphasize the word LOVE for several reasons but will talk more about that next time we chat?? (Adriana)" -- Dri. "YOUR TALKING ABOUT JESUS, I BELIEVE IN JESUS TO AND I SEE YOU HAVE UNDERSTANDING OF WHAT HE IS ABOUT. " -- K. POFFENBERGER, USA. Angry Fever by Sasu (4) "i like this, it flows well. nice work" -- rae. "I liked it too..." -- KM(Michelle). "Hey Sasu, I've been checking your writings out and I think you're very talented. I'm glad you liked my poem about my daughter." -- David D.. "I liked this...the flow is nice. If it were mine (and it is not) I think I would have ended it at "In a worl full of unrest". :)" -- mattie. And It�S Just Odd, A Bit Safd by Roberto J Moreno (2) "nice peice but that's an odd title lol" -- KM. "well done tale of emptiness." -- Just A Guy. Across Fields by Peter Rivendell (1) "short but with much meaning " -- mattie. Abacus Mind by Buxton (2) "I really like this one, surprised no one else has reviewed. Has a great flow and feel and just like you said yourself nothing beats dark and gloomy. I like the ideas and thoughts you questioned...nice work :) " -- Rebecca. "Hey man.. awesome poem... i loved it...I like how u put it together....i really enjoyed reading it.. poems and songs about feelin down, dark, stuff like that, is rite up in my alley, and u, are makin it better than ever..great job man" -- Tyler, Snook's Arm, NL, Canada. Winter's Wisdom by Sasu (5) "I really like this piece. I really hope to read more of your work. I think, from what Ive read, that you have a wonderful gift for writing. = )" -- Arayka. "Your poems are full of feeling, they have a good rythem to them and are very visual. Keep it up I would love to see more." -- Jennifer. "Thanks!! I feel visualisation is essential in poetry. " -- sasu. "hey,i think that's alright,not bad work" -- Brian L. "As mentioned before...the visualization in this piece is excellent! Some typo's though, but a very good piece even so. :)" -- mattie. When The Ginger Boy Sings by Skyler Drevan (3) "this is awesome...very well written indeed." -- KM. "Thanks for the compliment. I appreciate it." -- The Author. "It's always a pleasure to read your poetry! Good job!" -- e. rocco caldwell. Watching Eyes by E Daugherty (1) "Thanks Ericka, now I feel all paranoid ::looks around room nervously:: Good poem though. " -- Josh. Times Unknown Horror by E Daugherty (2) "Yeah, your'e right. Time does escape us, and it's really tood bad. Good work. " -- david doc byron. "You silly. Don't you know time is just an illusion? Just kidding. It was a good poem. I'd like to see more." -- some guy. Time For Change by Keri McGriff (1) "Keri, I enjoyed this stanza. I liked the line concerning Northern lights. I'm just not quite sure what you are trying to say." -- e. rocco caldwell. The Structue Of A Soul by Robert A Ferguson (1) "I wished I could have thought with such clarity when I was 16. You are very talent, Robert. Keep it up...I know you're going to be successful in this field." -- e. rocco caldwell. The Plague Of The Thought by Robert A Ferguson (1) "i really like this, i've gone through the same thing with a person i really love. nice work" -- rae. The Longing by Ruth Angelo (1) "this is really good...i can see the video already. Good job!!" -- KM. The Cave by Skyler Drevan (2) "This is a bit different from you ususal stuff, Sky. I liked it a lot though. Again you have proven your ability to visualize and write well." -- e. rocco caldwell. "You are right, Mr. Caldwell, this is a bit away from my usual style but as with most of my work, I don't like to conform to a specific style or format. At the same time, I do not want to confuse my readers so I will consider my path in writing. As usual, I do thank you for your continued support and comments to my work. It is much appreciated." -- The Author. Starless Sky by Keri McGriff (1) "That is truly beautiful" -- michelle. Real True Love by Sarah Beresh (1) "Once again...it's awesome...ur still on ur way kid...lol" -- *random me* again. Quater Full, Three-Quater's Empty! by Buxton (1) "shweet man!" -- deadjerry. Nothing Without You by Naveed Ahmed (1) "Hi my dear talented friend !!! I value your comment . So, please read my six Short Stories in this website by searching my name � Partha Pratim Majumder and send your feedback. Kindly remember that it is Y O U , for whom my pen walks thoughtfully. My E-Mail is : [email protected] / [email protected] " -- Partha Pratim Majumder, Kolkata, India. Not All That Easy by Just A Guy (5) "This is really good and oh too real...." -- KM. "Does seem to be how it is sometimes...nope...most times" -- mattie. "glad you ladies liked this, sorry if it hits home a bit too closely." -- JAG. ""leavings so hard when your heart isn�t in it" -- isn't it though... and the worst part is, you have a feeling your heart will never be in it. it's always the most stubborn. lovely work, like usual" -- rae. "The insecurities racing through and questioning everything actually brought me back to having been there..and my eyes welled up with tears...very accomplished poem!" -- mia angello, WI. Newborn Lamb by Robert A Ferguson (1) "Wonderful! Simply wonderfully done!" -- e. rocco caldwell. Nature Secrets by E Daugherty (1) "what a wondeful style. This reminds me of English Mythology. Read some of CS Leiws's poetry." -- e. rocco caldwell. My Passion by M Q Walters (8) "wow...lucky girl!" -- KM (Michelle). "Hey girl, put some of your medical knowledge to work and come up with a pill to be able to call up such dreams at will - i'll buy a bunch. to lust without shame - loved that line." -- JAG. "Thanx Michelle...wish I were such a lucky girl to know how to keep it...and I assure you JAG if I could create such a pill I would and I'd hand 'em out for free :)" -- mattie. "Yes...to lust without shame" -- mandi. "This is a very erotic and passionate poem.I liked it alot." -- David D. "Thank you David...I don't often write about this subject, glad you enjoyed it :)" -- mattie. "Really passionate.. It's just awesomne of how u could write something like this" -- Nikki Zuraidah. "wow-wee! great poem." -- Chloe . I Realized by Sarah Beresh (2) "Not bad. There are some word spelled wrong but other than that...not bad" -- e. rocco caldwell. "Hey...writers'r'us! really cool...sad but cool...i love it...u should start writin more...ur on ur way kid..." -- Michelle*it's me*. For 2000 Years And Hence... by Angel's Love Korak (2) "We get a point from this poem that sun don't get back it's rays which emitted, and time as well. But No other thing can heal every wound as time can. Time is like a running river, U can't stop it...just float away with it." -- Neelanjan Sinha, Kolaghat, West Bengal, India. "once in a life time creation at the peak of thoughts is bound too be great and equally special. a sincere thought of others is rarest of rarest and is ought to be appreciated and encouraged.i feel honoured to be a part of this dedication ..thank you SASWATA and love you always..." -- jayeeta chatterjee, kolkata, west bengal, india. Crying Myself To Sleep At Night by Sarah Beresh (4) "a couple of things...i like it. It has potential. the only thing i would try to work on is the forced rhyming and the capitization of Him (that's only for God) if you need to emphasis "him" then maybe try italizing. " -- michelle. "You r so good at this...u should write some stories*wink* join w/ me! lol....really cool...now i read more...toodles!" -- *random me*. "I agree with Michelle and kudos to random me for making me laugh" -- Steven. "Absolutely brilliant!" -- Luis Felipe Moura, S�o Paulo, SP, Brazil. An Answer by Robert A Ferguson (1) "In reading back over this, I get confused..." -- Robert A Ferguson. All Is A Lie by Duke Sekhon (1) "I love your stuff, Duke. " -- e. rocco caldwell. A Contradiction by Duke Sekhon (1) "We are what our cultures made us. We are born free but die entangled. Wonderful, Duke" -- e. rocco caldwell. A Bomb by B Galindo (1) "Very good. This puts me in mind of Langston Hughes a Dream deffered! You should read it! " -- e. rocco caldwell. 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