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A Poem For You by Ramkumar Menon (1) "Hi, very beautiful,D" -- Diana Venditti. A Colombia Hatred-Free by Randall Barfield (2) "I think this is a gem among coal. The struggles of Colombia are hidden to the average American. Your poem reveals some of it's internal problems. Racism and the surge of hatred among rebels and the established government maintained by America. I liked the the flow of your poem." -- e. rocco caldwell, tacoma, washington, USA. "The author, actually, is quite happy with Colombia's current administration. Our own Bush administration is another matter!" -- Randall Barfield. The Long Nothing; Or Sun, Sand & Surf by Jason Roland (3) "I really like these.... write more! Now! They're so... cynical, is that the word? They're excellent, at any rate." -- Wolfa. "if someone doesn't review my poems soon i'm going to have to commit suicide, now do you really want that to be on your head?" -- Danny. "Wow. i'm not dead yet. Guess that means i'm okay mentally...Nah." -- Danny. You'll Always Be Mine by Gary Thompson (1) "this was touching!why coudn't he just stay?why does love have to hurt so bad atimes?great power of expression,Gary!two thumps up!" -- kennedy, lagos, lagos, nigeria. Watcher by Alberto Pupo (2) "Great work, if you like this check out "He who knows". Inspiring!" -- Rondi Phillips. "GREATWORK!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing you have a very special talent." -- stephanie, morton, mississippi, usa. Vagabonds by Peggy J Bertrand (3) "Nicely done! I think you found your genre'" -- Richard. "Thank You Richard for viewing my poem." -- Peggy Bertrand. "I was hoping you wouldn't use the word "leaves" and make the reader try and interpret the poem. I thought it was leading me towards leaves." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom. Observation by Peggy J Bertrand (1) "I really enjoyed your poem and wanted to know if you would interested in letting me put it in my literary magazine. E-mail me for more details." -- Toni Lynch, Ohio. Love Questions by Ashley Burdett (7) "good prose. :)" -- Peggy J. Bertrand, Sioux City, IA, United States. "It is sad in a good way as Ms. Bertrand suggested, but it is "verse", not "prose."" -- The Advisor. "I like this! Plaintive, concise -- it says exactly what it sets out to, without unnecessary melodrama or length. Short, sweet, and sad." -- Bitch. "Prose n. 1. Language in ordinary usage, as opposed to verse. 2. Flat, unstimulating language. I believe the word Ms. Bertrand was reaching for to describe a story told in poem, is "narrative or epic poetry."" -- The Advisor. "Direct and concise. One might consider a more concrete poem." -- B.C. Harer, Mount Vernon, Washington, USA. "Exactly. I have written much on the subject." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom. "I really enjoyed your poem and wanted to know if you would interested in letting me put it in my literary magazine. E-mail me for more details." -- Toni Lynch, Ohio. Journey Into Nothing by Alberto Pupo (1) "Its great- don't touch it" -- Celeste . Every Night by Michelle Worswick (2) "Wow. Really cool. I'd like to meet you this march." -- Jesse Weinberg. "Often times the lips that were once there never really were..." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom. Do You . . . Blak Man? by Queen A Munn (1) "Please see the Advisor Column." -- The Advisor. Direction by Peggy J Bertrand (1) "give no room 4 doubt,Peggy,u'll surely make it through!great work!" -- kennedy, lagos, lagos, nigeria. Beginning by Bob (1) "This is quite exceptional work Bob. Give my love to Mrs. Bob." -- JA St. George. With Eyes Open by Dwight Bullock (2) "I relly like this poem. The author put a lot of thought into it and it is really deep." -- jannette, brooklyn, ny, u.s. "I enjoied the writings here, it to the point and is reality. When no one will stand up for you, you must stand up for yourself. " -- Mary Pruter, Chicago, USA, Il. Vorba by Martin De Leon (2) "THE CALEIDOSCHOPE OF FEELING, MEMORY AND POETRY IS ACHIEVED BEAUTIFULLY. IT REMINDS ME OF LEAVES BLOWN BY THE WIND AND - HOW DO YOU SY IT IN ENGLISH- ESPANTA- ESPIRITOS- AN OBJECT THAT IS HANGED NEAR THE WINDOWS AND WHERE THE WIND BLOWS IT JINGLES AND MAKES BEAUTIFUL SOUNDS" -- CARMEN ORTEGA. "I think you've just been compared to a wind-chime. I hope favorably... This piece doesn't seem to gel as well as some of your others. Oh well, they can't all be winners." -- AJ Magy. The Song Of A Goddess! by Alberto Pupo (1) "I really enjoyed your poem and wanted to know if you would interested in letting me put it in my literary magazine. E-mail me for more details." -- Toni Lynch, ohio. The Screaming Upstairs by Clarmila Orpeza (1) "Right on! I've been there and I like the way that you have expressed how fragile one's composure is. I have sustained heart and resisted tears, as I grew up in a conservative mode. Lived through the 1960's and have lightly tasted the illicit flavors of life. Be proud and do the right thing." -- B.C. Harer, Mount Vernon, Washington, USA. The Poem With No Name by Emma Michele Thomas (3) "I think she contradicts herself in the poem. I thought the beginning was good but the rest was not in order with the first part. I think she has potential but nothing else." -- Jannette, brooklyn, ny, u.s. "UH...Who the hell were you talking about. I personally think you want to be all "antichrist." whaa whaa whaa...The poem never really states nor does it give clues who her "GOD" happens to be. NOT like that really matters, but still. Someone get this girl a Zoloft!" -- Kelly, bloomington, Indiana, USA. "I disagree with both of the previous reviews. I PERSONALLY do not believe in God either. She even stated in the title that it was HER OPINION. If you don't like it, tough. I thought the poem was very good. You don't have to know who her "god" is in order for the poem to be good." -- Hilary. The Ambo's Of Alex by Gary Thompson (1) "Gary, this is a wonderful poem. So real to life and so sad at the same time. I really was touched by the verse and the story. you write beautiful poetry. thankyou for this piece. Peggy" -- Peggy J. Bertrand, Sioux City, IA, United States. Stolen Moments by Gary Thompson (1) "I think that this poem has a very good ending to it. I like your work, and I would like to read more of it. " -- Joanna, NY, USA. Spectre Of A Distant Past by Alberto Pupo (3) "This sounds very depressing... I wonder, who's it about?" -- Wolfa. 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Pleasures! by Alberto Pupo (1) "Short but sweet! " -- Jeffrey . Once Upon A Midnight Snacking by Christian Obermanns (3) "My God, this stinks. No, just kidding. Pretty cool poem. See you in class (you flaming idiot). " -- Don't ask, Same, Yes, USA hell ya!. "Ha!" -- David, Somewhere, SC, US. "a pretty constructive piece...great work!" -- KENNEDY, lagos, lagos, nigeria. My Closet by Peggy J Bertrand (2) "This is short and sweet and neat. If there are such creatures, we should let them be. Good advice to anyone." -- Richard. "Good concept. I'd like to know more about the elf, as "I" might assume. There might be a taunting sense of fear, even though "I" am at peace." -- B.C. Harer, Mount Vernon, Washington. Mistress Time.... by Alberto Pupo (5) "Very true." -- Alison, usa. "What is the focus of the poem. The first stanza seems to be impressing an oppinion, while the rest vaguely describes an object that threatens." -- B.C. Harer, Mount Vernon, Washington. "I LIKED THIS POEM IT WAS VERY TRUTHFUL, YET DEEP, VERY GOOD." -- SARAHA, RICHMOND, CA, US. 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Forbidden Love by Gary Thompson (2) "Interesting" -- Micheal , Maryland, USA. "I can sense the mood you are setting and know of the endings and beginnings in life. I was a TBI survivor and my father is a doctor of obstetrics. I'd like to know more about the situation you're writing about." -- B.C. Harer, Mount Vernon, Washington, USA. English Class by Ashley Burdett (1) "You write well, although you could add some more body the the emotional state that you are writing about." -- B.C. Harer, Mount Vernon, Washington. Delusions Of Grandeur by Alberto Pupo (1) "..." -- Wolfa. A Very Special Friend by Peggy J Bertrand (2) "Peggie, I too like your work. I would like to speak with you please send me you email ad. Gary Thompson [email protected]" -- Gary Thompson, Melbourne, Victoria, Australia. "I'm sorry but I found this rather twee and sugary, like the message you get in greetings cards. However, if that is your desired effect, then 100% spot on." -- Harvey Kennett, Chelmsford, Essex, UK. A Soldier's Letter by Randall Barfield (1) "Touching, sweet, heart-rending, but not terribly good as a poem. " -- dee. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 |
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